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I’ve been sacked
I’m gutted
Must get job back
Somehow, anyhow
Arrgh! Frenzy Think, think, think

Tap, tap, tap
My numbers go in
This will bring him back
It’s a car, black and fast
Very expensive too.

I step of the bus
And walk to her house
I knock on the door, I sweat
She comes down the stairs
The door opens there she is

Bang, bang the barrel smokes
I snap a picture
This will please him
Back in the car
His car I guess

I find his alley
I smell death
I creep in to show him the picture
I hear him behind me and turn excited
Bang, bang… I fall
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The Assassins

Contributed by bzzbzz on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 02:09:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The Assassins

I’ve been sacked
I’m gutted
Must get job back
Somehow, anyhow
Arrgh! Frenzy Think, think, think

Tap, tap, tap
My numbers go in
This will bring him back
It’s a car, black and fast
Very expensive too.

I step of the bus
And walk to her house
I knock on the door, I sweat
She comes down the stairs
The door opens there she is

Bang, bang the barrel smokes
I snap a picture
This will please him
Back in the car
His car I guess

I find his alley
I smell death
I creep in to show him the picture
I hear him behind me and turn excited
Bang, bang… I fall

Copyright Â© bzzbzz ... [ 2006-02-10 14:09:04]
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Re: The Assassins (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:30:16 PM AEST
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a cool poem story interesting write ty for the post

Re: The Assassins (User Rating: 1 )
by ivoryA on Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 08:13:11 AM AEST
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this is a very intriguing poem. I love your use of words...its simply written yet it has meaning...

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