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As your ship comes to shore
Will you take me back
Or will you cast me away
I'll fall into your arms and never let go
I'm spilling out my heart again
And asking for yours in return
The waves of the ocean brought you back to me
I never once underestimated the power of the sea
I could tell by the rays of the sun
We'd be together as one
Walking hand in hand
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The Ocean's Fury

Contributed by justinjohnoliver on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:37:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I reach out my hand to you
As your ship comes to shore
Will you take me back
Or will you cast me away
I'll fall into your arms and never let go
I'm spilling out my heart again
And asking for yours in return
The waves of the ocean brought you back to me
I never once underestimated the power of the sea
I could tell by the rays of the sun
We'd be together as one
Walking hand in hand
Starting over again

Copyright © justinjohnoliver ... [ 2006-02-09 17:37:17]
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Re: The Ocean's Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:58:22 PM AEST
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what a very beautiful write.

Re: The Ocean's Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:50:12 PM AEST
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Good work and welcome.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Ocean's Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 11:11:44 PM AEST
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I've always like poems about the sea. I'm glad he came back to you. Maybe he'll never ship out again.

Re: The Ocean's Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 12:34:10 AM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u enjoy it here.
A very well penned write expressed so well. A very good 1st submission I can't wait to read some more work from u.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: The Ocean's Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:11:07 PM AEST
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You're so right!! Never under-estimate the power of the sea....
A lovely write....
Jenni

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