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Under- moon politics.

Arch to beams will not change powers.
Tales to be told close our eyes.
Could be loves on tricks to Rome.
Would be rooms are that are rarely to build the sky.

Full of distances we love our ways.
Treats are spoons and tricks are baits.
Real to honors are to switch our facts.
Balances of powers have no good eggs.

Bald eagles have weights on hairs.
Ball bearing is time slots.
Plutocracies are heavy grounds on airs.
But air blow up the wings to loss!

Loss a lot is on ways to landing.
A box is a house for honor classes.
A sense of periods is when winds are heavy.
There are acidic brains when dealers appear.

All measures tie up with stones.
Rap words are not good music.
Bay leaf is not moon flowers.
How to throw a coin to moon when it is under?
--------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3--------

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under the moon politics-cauchy3

Contributed by cauchy3 on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic: political

Under- moon politics.

Arch to beams will not change powers.
Tales to be told close our eyes.
Could be loves on tricks to Rome.
Would be rooms are that are rarely to build the sky.

Full of distances we love our ways.
Treats are spoons and tricks are baits.
Real to honors are to switch our facts.
Balances of powers have no good eggs.

Bald eagles have weights on hairs.
Ball bearing is time slots.
Plutocracies are heavy grounds on airs.
But air blow up the wings to loss!

Loss a lot is on ways to landing.
A box is a house for honor classes.
A sense of periods is when winds are heavy.
There are acidic brains when dealers appear.

All measures tie up with stones.
Rap words are not good music.
Bay leaf is not moon flowers.
How to throw a coin to moon when it is under?
--------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3--------

Copyright © cauchy3 ... [ 2006-02-09 17:03:26]
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Re: under the moon politics-cauchy3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Opinionator on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:28:01 PM AEST
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This goes past symbolism to plain nonsense. Are you on drugs because I doubt someone on crack would even get this. For metaphor to make sense it should be tied to something and this is certainly not. It is beautifully worded but I have no idea what you are even getting at.

Re: under the moon politics-cauchy3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Opinionator on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:30:58 PM AEST
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After reading it again I also have to say that the grammar is horrifying. I know that poetry doesn't have to follow most rules in English but I believe that noun-verb agreement is a basic principle that almost everyone can follow.

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