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Array ( [sid] => 114555 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can anyone Save [time] => 2006-02-09 16:34:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Running around, try and find a sound
That keeps me hear alive
So distant so far gone
Can anyone save me

Living hear, nothing but a fodder for the ones
That keep me hear once more
To suppress all of their desires
Walking among the damned

Come and help me if you can
Try and fail again
Deaths has his grip on me
Can anyone save
Can anything save
Me_________

Nothing but a lost waste of time
Come and help me now your mine
Nothing but a vessel for the ones
That keep me here disorient

So far gone, souls don’t mean anything
Living as the walking dead
Who says heavens real
Who say Hell’s real
Can anyone save me

Come and help me if you can
Try and fail again
Deaths has his grip on me
Can anyone save
Can anything save
Me_________
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Can anyone Save

Contributed by Kayden on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Running around, try and find a sound
That keeps me hear alive
So distant so far gone
Can anyone save me

Living hear, nothing but a fodder for the ones
That keep me hear once more
To suppress all of their desires
Walking among the damned

Come and help me if you can
Try and fail again
Deaths has his grip on me
Can anyone save
Can anything save
Me_________

Nothing but a lost waste of time
Come and help me now your mine
Nothing but a vessel for the ones
That keep me here disorient

So far gone, souls don’t mean anything
Living as the walking dead
Who says heavens real
Who say Hell’s real
Can anyone save me

Come and help me if you can
Try and fail again
Deaths has his grip on me
Can anyone save
Can anything save
Me_________

Copyright Â© Kayden ... [ 2006-02-09 16:34:13]
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Re: Can anyone Save (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:39:02 PM AEST
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Jimmy,
A real thought provoking write u have here. One can feel the pain and suffering from within themselves. A very well penned write. Keep up the great work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: Can anyone Save (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 12:45:33 AM AEST
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hey there,
i agree with sue, a very thought provoking write, i especially like the fourth stanza,
great choice of words.
amazing job

Re: Can anyone Save (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 10:31:31 PM AEST
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A dark and sad write. Well presented

whisper

Re: Can anyone Save (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedangel on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 05:56:26 PM AEST
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great poem well written, its a great poem for dark entry

Re: Can anyone Save (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 02:37:23 PM AEST
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Well written poem...I liked it alot.
Jeff

Re: Can anyone Save (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 03:51:25 PM AEST
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Very deep write. I like the structure of this. Nice wrie. I look forward to reading more.:)

~Lo

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