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Array ( [sid] => 114550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''I will not let him have her if I can't'' [time] => 2006-02-09 15:23:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your swear you love me, that I am your life.

You promised you would never hurt me, but that was a lie.

Now rage and jealousy over run your being, leaving only one thing on your mind.

"I will not let him have her if I can't"

Blade in hand you stand over me, the workds I love you creep from your pink lips.

You press the blade against my neck, and I begin to stir.

My eyes open, leaving your tear stained face to be me final sight. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 76 [informant] => Sandra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => obsession )
''I will not let him have her if I can't''

Contributed by Sandra on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 03:23:00 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession



Your swear you love me, that I am your life.

You promised you would never hurt me, but that was a lie.

Now rage and jealousy over run your being, leaving only one thing on your mind.

"I will not let him have her if I can't"

Blade in hand you stand over me, the workds I love you creep from your pink lips.

You press the blade against my neck, and I begin to stir.

My eyes open, leaving your tear stained face to be me final sight.




Copyright © Sandra ... [ 2006-02-09 15:23:00]
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Re: ''I will not let him have her if I can't'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:15:20 PM AEST
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Short but sharp, probably like the knife itself
Well done

Steve


Re: ''I will not let him have her if I can't'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Kayden on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:40:43 PM AEST
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Wow! Intense! I love it... Everything was so descriptive... Kept my attention from start to Finish... Incredible Wright... Great Job!

-------Jimmy




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