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Array ( [sid] => 114542 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fix Me [time] => 2006-02-09 11:41:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dangling on the threads of hope,
I’m falling again,
Lost again.
Staring in your eyes
As I swallow my pride,
Once again.
I curse at you but in my heart I need you.
The irony is bitter,
There’s nothing sweet to see through.
I Ask for you to save me,
Once again.

Please take this scalpel and fix me.
Drain the swelling and show me light,
But careful now, my tired heart is losing fight.

Thrashing through this life at light speed,
I have finally crashed.
Lying here mangled in pieces,
A collage of wrinkles and creases.
The angels in my eyes are burning
As I glare into the darkness,
Seeking for your voice.
Take this hollow hand, and shed me mercy.
I knew I was wrong, all along, I knew
I was never worthy.

Please take this scalpel and fix me,
Rearrange these veins, so that I can feel
The pain again.

Pick up the pieces as they drop,
Then clean this up with a dirty mop.
Drinking so much but I’m still in thirst,
Overflowing lungs are bound to burst.
Walking on a razor blade, I’ve finally seem to slip.
Stumbling down so fast I crash,
Should’ve had a better grip.

Take this blade, and make your incision.
Confidant as each stroke should be.
Release this poison and set me free.
Please take this scalpel and fix me.

"The Monk"
(comments please)

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Fix Me

Contributed by themonk on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 11:41:16 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



Dangling on the threads of hope,
I’m falling again,
Lost again.
Staring in your eyes
As I swallow my pride,
Once again.
I curse at you but in my heart I need you.
The irony is bitter,
There’s nothing sweet to see through.
I Ask for you to save me,
Once again.

Please take this scalpel and fix me.
Drain the swelling and show me light,
But careful now, my tired heart is losing fight.

Thrashing through this life at light speed,
I have finally crashed.
Lying here mangled in pieces,
A collage of wrinkles and creases.
The angels in my eyes are burning
As I glare into the darkness,
Seeking for your voice.
Take this hollow hand, and shed me mercy.
I knew I was wrong, all along, I knew
I was never worthy.

Please take this scalpel and fix me,
Rearrange these veins, so that I can feel
The pain again.

Pick up the pieces as they drop,
Then clean this up with a dirty mop.
Drinking so much but I’m still in thirst,
Overflowing lungs are bound to burst.
Walking on a razor blade, I’ve finally seem to slip.
Stumbling down so fast I crash,
Should’ve had a better grip.

Take this blade, and make your incision.
Confidant as each stroke should be.
Release this poison and set me free.
Please take this scalpel and fix me.

"The Monk"
(comments please)





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Re: Fix Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 02:52:31 PM AEST
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Sad yet, beautifull in it's full blown nature.

Thrashing through this life at light speed,
I have finally crashed.

Luv these lines.
Life is so fast at times.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Fix Me (User Rating: 1 )
by all_that_i_can_be on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:26:23 PM AEST
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its rare to find a poem with such strength and feeling.
i loved it. amazing write.


Re: Fix Me (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:58:32 PM AEST
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What do people expect VinnyV? ur the best man...ur poems exceed so many others. Everyone loves ur work especially me. this poem reminds me of a postal service song i think....good job once again my friend...we'll b poets till the end.


-m-o-s


Re: Fix Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 11:01:43 PM AEST
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Kinda says it all when you're hurting. Keep the creative ink flowing.


Re: Fix Me (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_goddess on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:30:20 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, it's amazing how many people can experience the same feelings but where most dwell on it, some make something beautiful out of it. Great stuff, keep up the good work love!




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