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Cracked Shell
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 11:56:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Fool I am for leaving my sanctuary.
Now that I think of it,
I can’t think of anything more wondrous
Than walking an icy Victorian morning
With fogged glasses on.
Frost at my fingertips
Now has dried up with my soul.
I now mend with literature
Regurgitating what energy I have left.
My shell cracked long ago
I now shall brush the silken webs away
Shake my fist at you
And crawl back in. And never leave.
Copyright ©
Lady_Daisy
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2006-02-08 23:56:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cracked Shell
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:10:33 AM AEST (User
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Lady Daisy, such a mournful write, beautifully so. Thank you for sharing, Peace, Laura |
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Re: Cracked Shell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lee on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 01:44:19 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed reading your poem, Lady_Daisy. Thank you for sharing it with Your Poetry Dot Com.
I am Lee Ferris. I am a poet. I am also a cashier. There is a wide road ahead of us all if we just look for : "The Road Less Traveled"-Robert Frost.
I like your romantic style, although I write like the contemporaries like William S. Burroughs and Fredrico Garcia Lorca. They wrote Naked Lunch and Poet in New York, respectively.
Have you ever read On the Road by Jack Kearuoac? I do not like to read much of the beat poets except for Allen Ginsberg's Howl. I do not like the rough language that they used to describe beauty.
I like James Douglas Morrison's The Lords and the New Creatures. He wrote the New Creatures "For Pamela Susan". The Lords were Notes on Vision.
My book is entitled The Afternoon Moon Looms: Poems and the publisher is PublishAmerica. It has mystical, spiritual, mythological, love , surreal, and
science-fiction poems in it.
The Dadists came after the Surrealists, so I would be considered a North American Minimalist or (Dadist), if you will, Lady_Daisy. |
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Re: Cracked Shell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 01:44:50 PM AEST (User
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A treat to read.Sad but so eloquently put
Thanks for sharing this
Steve |
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Re: Cracked Shell
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 06:55:16 PM AEST (User
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nice write. im a little confused about what it all means but who cares right? |
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