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To Far Down
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:35:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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obsessive thoughts, unstoppable pen
oh the troubles of mice and men
call me crazy, say im sane
as long as its not you to blame
no one cares, just back away
pretend im not, say its okay
ok was cutting, ok was drugs
im to far past therapy and hugs
you cant help, you cant make it stop
do i look small this far down from the top?
i dont need your pity, i dont want the shame
i am the only one to blame
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Re: To Far Down
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:56:48 AM AEST
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| Excellent write, but I "To far Down' plus some other lines with the word to in it need to be 'too'. Good write anyway. |
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Re: To Far Down
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by xtremcalibur on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:46:45 AM AEST
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| I am only interested in poems from the heart. I felt your hands while writing and I felt pain cause I am there. Good write and you know that you can do something if your really had the desire. At the moment I have the desire, but not the ambition to move foward because down is so far from the top. The struggle would be too great right now. Thank you for writing. |
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