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Array ( [sid] => 11448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Another Fading Teenager Heart [time] => 2003-01-28 00:30:00 [hometext] => Hey. I'm 15 from North Shore, MA. I'm currently in a pop/punk, emo band. If your interested in this kind of music let me know. My AIM s/n is Raj4987. O yea and this poem makes me seem smart but I'm not. Leave a comment too................. [bodytext] => The sun will radiate the glow of our fading passion.
Prevent this from slowly fading from our needs.
After all these falling hearts have hit the ground,
I will leave and once again fall into this never- ending trap of love.
It feels as if this heart has loved so many times,
And has broken twice as much.
What can I do?
What can I do to save this night from slipping into the last my cares?
Another mislead teen leaving his love shining in the past.

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Another Fading Teenager Heart

Contributed by ForeverTheory on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The sun will radiate the glow of our fading passion.
Prevent this from slowly fading from our needs.
After all these falling hearts have hit the ground,
I will leave and once again fall into this never- ending trap of love.
It feels as if this heart has loved so many times,
And has broken twice as much.
What can I do?
What can I do to save this night from slipping into the last my cares?
Another mislead teen leaving his love shining in the past.

Copyright © ForeverTheory ... [ 2003-01-28 00:30:00]
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Re: Another Fading Teenager Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Arwen on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 02:40:29 AM AEST
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hey u! nice poem bru, very sincere and eloquent. I guess there must be a lot of teens who feel this way hey? Most of them never find outlets to express these feelings and to let go. You have. Well done :) Loving and leaving the memories behind is sometimes part of life. It takes you to places that you've never been before. You live, love and sometimes...you have to walk away.

Just stay cool and jump into every new minute. I know you can! :)))

A beautiful piece. cheerz

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