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Array ( [sid] => 114453 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The mood of a mind [time] => 2006-02-07 20:18:30 [hometext] => to many moods at once.....nature helps [bodytext] => Perplexed by the wind in a storm
looking around to see where it gushes from
confused by the sun's inviting warmth
and greeted by the burn from which it grants
crying to the ground when it holds you up
yelling when it falls beneth you
clouds shrouding over you in darkness
letting you see it's good side when light
starring at the stars soul as it blinds you
and dimmming itself into non existance
freezing as the water rushes onto your body
drifting when it carries you away

...then it stops.....the silence before the storm
making you nervious....letting you cherish the moment
then it finally hits...the big one
everything ends
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 65 [informant] => Dragontear27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

The mood of a mind

Contributed by Dragontear27 on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Perplexed by the wind in a storm
looking around to see where it gushes from
confused by the sun's inviting warmth
and greeted by the burn from which it grants
crying to the ground when it holds you up
yelling when it falls beneth you
clouds shrouding over you in darkness
letting you see it's good side when light
starring at the stars soul as it blinds you
and dimmming itself into non existance
freezing as the water rushes onto your body
drifting when it carries you away

...then it stops.....the silence before the storm
making you nervious....letting you cherish the moment
then it finally hits...the big one
everything ends

Copyright © Dragontear27 ... [ 2006-02-07 20:18:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The mood of a mind (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:30:31 PM AEST
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good write, i can see the many emotions, i feel em', i like it alot

keep it up,
-m-o-s

Re: The mood of a mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:31:41 PM AEST
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Exellent writing.
I luv the way u set the mood.
Was that the end of the Planet or the mood?
Actually I suppose that would be up to the reader, huh?
Maybe it was a brain tornadoe sttorm.
very creative, thought provoking write.
good work.
huggs,
emy

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