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Array ( [sid] => 11445 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I don't want this anymore [time] => 2003-01-27 23:45:00 [hometext] => This is another one that my counslor wanted me to write. [bodytext] => The anger the crying the tears
all of them have disappeared
please Lord, help me to remember
the ones that make my emotions hinder

some names come out so strong
but in all the chaos some seem so wrong
don’t cry don’t cry you’ll be so weak
then you’ll be used and abused and to all of them bleak

they’ll hate you and scorn you and tell you you’re weak
and in all the chaos it’s only help that you seek
the blood and the lines and the feeling of pain
is all that can help you to keep you mind sane

it’s bad and it’s wrong and it shouldn’t be done
but to me all the pain is just too much fun
help me and hold me and tell me its fine
that I’ll get over the pain that made me cut that line

but it wont. Nothing will. It will only get worse
that’s when I loose it, the blade comes out of my purse
the pain is too much, cant take anymore
that’s when I close out the world and shut the door [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 32 [informant] => me_n_me_alone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I don't want this anymore

Contributed by me_n_me_alone on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The anger the crying the tears
all of them have disappeared
please Lord, help me to remember
the ones that make my emotions hinder

some names come out so strong
but in all the chaos some seem so wrong
don’t cry don’t cry you’ll be so weak
then you’ll be used and abused and to all of them bleak

they’ll hate you and scorn you and tell you you’re weak
and in all the chaos it’s only help that you seek
the blood and the lines and the feeling of pain
is all that can help you to keep you mind sane

it’s bad and it’s wrong and it shouldn’t be done
but to me all the pain is just too much fun
help me and hold me and tell me its fine
that I’ll get over the pain that made me cut that line

but it wont. Nothing will. It will only get worse
that’s when I loose it, the blade comes out of my purse
the pain is too much, cant take anymore
that’s when I close out the world and shut the door

Copyright Â© me_n_me_alone ... [ 2003-01-27 23:45:00]
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Re: I don't want this anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 10:23:02 PM AEST
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Wow, this was so beautiful better than the first. I am amazed this was so well penned. Its great from start to finish.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I don't want this anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 01:32:11 AM AEST
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another great write. I agree with bobo again!

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