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Array ( [sid] => 1144 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Victory [time] => 2002-07-26 06:39:05 [hometext] => I wrote this for my eldest nephew who has had
a rough time. And because I love him and am
very proud of him.
[bodytext] => At fifteen years of age,
you are born.
Born, perhaps prematurely,
into manhood.
Your life till now
has not been one
of which nursery rhymes are made.
More like a heavy metal lullaby.

You have lived the life
of a fighter.
An exhausting, seemingly endless
uphill run.
Evervigilant in your stance,
your guard up and unyielding.
Your eyes never leaving
an unpredictable,
and unscrupulous opponent.

The fight is over now.
The glory is yours ,
so revel in it.
It is time to drop your guard now,
my precious,
bravehearted one.
Let me take your hand,
and allow me to proudly
raise it high above your head,
in honor of your victory.
The title is yours to wear with pride
and forever yours to keep. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 38 [informant] => POOBEAR [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )

Victory

Contributed by POOBEAR on Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:39:05 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

At fifteen years of age,
you are born.
Born, perhaps prematurely,
into manhood.
Your life till now
has not been one
of which nursery rhymes are made.
More like a heavy metal lullaby.

You have lived the life
of a fighter.
An exhausting, seemingly endless
uphill run.
Evervigilant in your stance,
your guard up and unyielding.
Your eyes never leaving
an unpredictable,
and unscrupulous opponent.

The fight is over now.
The glory is yours ,
so revel in it.
It is time to drop your guard now,
my precious,
bravehearted one.
Let me take your hand,
and allow me to proudly
raise it high above your head,
in honor of your victory.
The title is yours to wear with pride
and forever yours to keep.

Copyright © POOBEAR ... [ 2002-07-26 06:39:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Victory (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 12:49:45 AM AEST
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Poobear,

This is beautiful... nice use of language...

Re: Victory (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 06:23:04 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful Lynn...definitely my favourite of yours up to now. What a perfect gesture of your love for him.
Lots of love
Chrissie xx

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