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[aid] => mick
[title] => The wedding dance
[time] => 2006-02-06 19:10:54
[hometext] => I'm not really happy with this. The first part came easy, but i struggled with the rest (which is rare) which means it will be worked on (as opposed to shelved and never seen again, as most of them are) anyway, do give me your opinion.it is important^_^
[bodytext] => Before the throes of lilies white and stolen breasts, a forest grows blanch and bright beneath the sweet, sweet kiss of night, and leaves upon every leaf, a silver key, a silver light, to which the hunting owl takes flight over the open fields. It is the wedding dance we weep, as the lilies torn and ragged forms are washed from us into the blackest steep of death, and rides from there to the great golden keep of heavens lost reward. Over the mountain's cold and snowy peak where lilies lay her love to rest, let no heart of no man seek, against the strength and strong will of shadows meek resolve, the capacity of her love. And for her forever, we will dance the wedding dance before the summer's forge begins; And for her forever, we will spread the lilies lance to pierce the heavens dead renewal. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 73 [informant] => iodinelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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