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Array ( [sid] => 11436 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Ocean meditation [time] => 2003-01-27 21:30:00 [hometext] => This is my first ever poem here, though I guess it may not seem like a poem, more like my thoughts..
I always seem to view the world as a mini paradise, but then the world is a beautiful place:) [bodytext] => Here I sit once more on the cliff`s edge,
Gazing out to the Vast Ocean below,
White thunderous waves crash against the
crags and crevices, filling the cool
salty air with Ozone and sparkling foam.
Concentrated light creating beautiful rainbows everywhere, enchantment surrounds me in this marine paradise, I sit alone and listen with eyes closed and heart open, feeling the natural meditation overwhelm my senses. My world begins to glow.
Seagulls soar towards the golden sun high above, catching warm currents and spiral in the vast blue heavens, then divebomb into the cool depths below to grasp unlucky fish, and the whole ocean sparkles like thousands of tiny crystals as their splashes reach towards the sky.
Something beautiful and ancient stirs within my soul, I feel that I have always belonged to this watery realm, and to it one day, I shall return..
A cool breeze blows across my face, and I rouse from my meditation. It is time to leave once more, but a welcome awaits me tomorrow, where once again I shall merge with the blue..... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 19 [informant] => PatchAdams [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Ocean meditation

Contributed by PatchAdams on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Here I sit once more on the cliff`s edge,
Gazing out to the Vast Ocean below,
White thunderous waves crash against the
crags and crevices, filling the cool
salty air with Ozone and sparkling foam.
Concentrated light creating beautiful rainbows everywhere, enchantment surrounds me in this marine paradise, I sit alone and listen with eyes closed and heart open, feeling the natural meditation overwhelm my senses. My world begins to glow.
Seagulls soar towards the golden sun high above, catching warm currents and spiral in the vast blue heavens, then divebomb into the cool depths below to grasp unlucky fish, and the whole ocean sparkles like thousands of tiny crystals as their splashes reach towards the sky.
Something beautiful and ancient stirs within my soul, I feel that I have always belonged to this watery realm, and to it one day, I shall return..
A cool breeze blows across my face, and I rouse from my meditation. It is time to leave once more, but a welcome awaits me tomorrow, where once again I shall merge with the blue.....

Copyright © PatchAdams ... [ 2003-01-27 21:30:00]
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Re: Ocean meditation (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 10:58:19 PM AEST
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Patch,this was so beautiful it really took me to that place! Lovely write! Welcome!Christina

Re: Ocean meditation (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:27:33 PM AEST
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Alan this is lovely, I love sitting by ocean water too only haven't done so in years, so beautifully written and love the, "ancient stirs within my soul".. very sweet write and gives one a peaceful feeling:) hugs and beauty to you and yours, always Nessa

Re: Ocean meditation (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:35:32 PM AEST
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this is so peaceful and serene..

Re: Ocean meditation (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 03:23:20 AM AEST
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I find this hard to believe this was your first poem this was amazing. Really created great imagery in my head. Damn if only I could write like you.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Ocean meditation (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 05:58:58 AM AEST
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so relaxing, i can just imagin it so well....

xxx
broken skin

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