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Array ( [sid] => 114346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I could be [time] => 2006-02-06 09:55:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I could be
That sunshine that wakes you at dawn
I could be
The reason you sing those love songs
But you...
You don't want me
No..not you
And I dont understand it you see
We laugh and we talk
We share secrets
And we go for long walks
Your love...I forever seek it
But your heart has a lock
And I do not have the combination
And I should let it go
But I cannot resist the temptation
Tingling from my head to my toes
Yea..I'm in love
But as Bonnie says...I cant make you love me
You are all that I ever dream of
But you insist that you never dream of me
And it hurts because I know we could be so good together
But you love her
You took a tempory over forever
You dream of her
She loves you for all the wrong reasons
And I love you for you
Through all four seasons
I only wish that you knew
I could be
A lover and a friend
I could be
That love making that you never want to end
But you dont wan't that
You are so blinded
Yes..you
Your love.. it will take forever to find it
She has you chained
Life to be so bright
Now...all it does is rain
So you dont want me...alright
But when she hurts you that one last time
You will then see the light
And you will see that you need to be mine
Through the hot days and the cold nights
Its me you will be looking to find

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I could be

Contributed by Poetic_Influence on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I could be
That sunshine that wakes you at dawn
I could be
The reason you sing those love songs
But you...
You don't want me
No..not you
And I dont understand it you see
We laugh and we talk
We share secrets
And we go for long walks
Your love...I forever seek it
But your heart has a lock
And I do not have the combination
And I should let it go
But I cannot resist the temptation
Tingling from my head to my toes
Yea..I'm in love
But as Bonnie says...I cant make you love me
You are all that I ever dream of
But you insist that you never dream of me
And it hurts because I know we could be so good together
But you love her
You took a tempory over forever
You dream of her
She loves you for all the wrong reasons
And I love you for you
Through all four seasons
I only wish that you knew
I could be
A lover and a friend
I could be
That love making that you never want to end
But you dont wan't that
You are so blinded
Yes..you
Your love.. it will take forever to find it
She has you chained
Life to be so bright
Now...all it does is rain
So you dont want me...alright
But when she hurts you that one last time
You will then see the light
And you will see that you need to be mine
Through the hot days and the cold nights
Its me you will be looking to find

Copyright © Poetic_Influence ... [ 2006-02-06 09:55:25]
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Re: I could be (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 11:23:36 AM AEST
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hang tuff, great write.
huggs,
emy

Re: I could be (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 12:14:39 PM AEST
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like emy said, hang in there. it really sucks to be in this situation, been there and its not nice. i lost my best friend through that but it showed me who he really was. i hope this is not the case for you.

good luck.

Re: I could be (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 03:55:33 PM AEST
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tough stuff. It's a gutwrenchingly honest piece and
I wish all the best for you. Take Care and keep up
the fine writing..

Re: I could be (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:41:09 PM AEST
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This is very touching u have a nice style and it
comes across very real and very innocent and very sincere. A most splendid peice of writting.

Ben

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