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Array ( [sid] => 114345 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life of Darkness [time] => 2006-02-06 09:50:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look into my eyes
And tell me what you see
Do you see all my empty lies?
Or do you see my eternity

In this world I will never die
I am an empty seed
You can’t kill me if you try
Because I will never bleed

I’m not like everyone here
Who live instead of hide?
Always running, in constant fear
Of the demon lurking inside

Inside of me there are tow
Both innocence and hate
She is looking for something true
Hate is trying to seal my fate

I cannot kill this evil
That’s tearing apart my soul
Always in it for the kill
It has finally taken its toll

The pain, the suffering the hate
Things I have done so wrong
God, tell me this isn’t fate
When I have waited so long

For forgiveness from you
For a type of sign
Maybe a miracle too
Help me follow a straight line

And that’s when somebody walked
Into my life, through the front door
That’s when I spoke, I talked
Something that had been waited for

Dried no longer were the tears
Emotions flooded back to me
And I said goodbye to all my fears
I was finally living in reality


I could see there was more
Out in this world than sadness
Than I had believed before
In my world there was so much less

The demon was finally gone
And I stepped into the light
Almost like an adult fawn
And this world was an amazing sight

I had the experiences of an adult
I had the body of a teen
I was the only one at fault
Because of what I had seen

I couldn’t be on my own
Cause your love keeps me going
My hearts holes you had sown
I can now stop the running.
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Life of Darkness

Contributed by slayer on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:50:45 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Look into my eyes
And tell me what you see
Do you see all my empty lies?
Or do you see my eternity

In this world I will never die
I am an empty seed
You can’t kill me if you try
Because I will never bleed

I’m not like everyone here
Who live instead of hide?
Always running, in constant fear
Of the demon lurking inside

Inside of me there are tow
Both innocence and hate
She is looking for something true
Hate is trying to seal my fate

I cannot kill this evil
That’s tearing apart my soul
Always in it for the kill
It has finally taken its toll

The pain, the suffering the hate
Things I have done so wrong
God, tell me this isn’t fate
When I have waited so long

For forgiveness from you
For a type of sign
Maybe a miracle too
Help me follow a straight line

And that’s when somebody walked
Into my life, through the front door
That’s when I spoke, I talked
Something that had been waited for

Dried no longer were the tears
Emotions flooded back to me
And I said goodbye to all my fears
I was finally living in reality


I could see there was more
Out in this world than sadness
Than I had believed before
In my world there was so much less

The demon was finally gone
And I stepped into the light
Almost like an adult fawn
And this world was an amazing sight

I had the experiences of an adult
I had the body of a teen
I was the only one at fault
Because of what I had seen

I couldn’t be on my own
Cause your love keeps me going
My hearts holes you had sown
I can now stop the running.




Copyright © slayer ... [ 2006-02-06 09:50:45]
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Re: Life of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:20:47 PM AEST
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Great poem!!!!!!!!
Excellent work!!!!!!!!!!



Brian


Re: Life of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:44:20 AM AEST
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WOW VERY NICELY DONE I CAN FEEL THE EMOTION




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