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Spirit of true love divine
Bring us wisdom ageless
Help us to seek and find

The path to peace
To living with respect
Bring us together
Others views no longer reject

Take us from our selfishness
Too compassions gate
Make us lights of love
So the world’s need we can sate

For if only all worked together
We could save this planet
And live in harmony
With all that exist on it
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Creator Please

Contributed by NoSaint on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:48:06 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Creator of the Universe
Spirit of true love divine
Bring us wisdom ageless
Help us to seek and find

The path to peace
To living with respect
Bring us together
Others views no longer reject

Take us from our selfishness
Too compassions gate
Make us lights of love
So the world’s need we can sate

For if only all worked together
We could save this planet
And live in harmony
With all that exist on it

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2006-02-06 09:48:06]
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Re: Creator Please (User Rating: 1 )
by darkstarsk8er1989 on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:52:25 AM AEST
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This is one poem that I can read over and over I really enjoy it. I hope to see many more from you.
~Dark~

Re: Creator Please (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 12:57:56 PM AEST
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Amen. This is so beautiful, Shari, and full of truth and love. This is what our lives are supposed to be about. Bless you.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Creator Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 03:36:12 PM AEST
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Yes, we are a spirit, His seed gave us our birth. He wants us all to understand we are all good, He never made us to be anything but His perfect child. Perfect, yes, in His name we all are, when we follow Him, obey His rules, to this, you may certainly say you are perfect spirits. Your poem is gracious... hugs. raquel leah 5 stars up

Re: Creator Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 07:36:44 PM AEST
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A prayer each should share. Harmony is so unreachable, but only because we have made it that way. An inspiring work. Great Job!

- SCM

Re: Creator Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:53:21 AM AEST
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Peace & Love
we are all in need of your prayer
Thank You

Re: Creator Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 10:51:07 PM AEST
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Fantastic. Very well written.

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