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[title] => poets plea
[time] => 2006-02-06 09:17:29
[hometext] => for every life you touch may come away the better for it and you'll never even know
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seems that i've tried to write
alas, no longer take the time,
to say what it is, in my heart
or lives within' my mind,
i know there's some goings on
yet they will not come out,
snow a field enlivens me
yet, words take other routes,
voiceless silent i am amazed
as this, my world slips by,
wings unspread, soul unfurled
it appears i cannot fly,
'tis a recluse that i've become
only family and dogs do i see,
i wish my pen doth not run dry
this is my humble poets plea.
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[informant] => ladyfawn
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[score] => 93
[ratings] => 19
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
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poets plea
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:17:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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seems that i've tried to write
alas, no longer take the time,
to say what it is, in my heart
or lives within' my mind,
i know there's some goings on
yet they will not come out,
snow a field enlivens me
yet, words take other routes,
voiceless silent i am amazed
as this, my world slips by,
wings unspread, soul unfurled
it appears i cannot fly,
'tis a recluse that i've become
only family and dogs do i see,
i wish my pen doth not run dry
this is my humble poets plea.
§* *§
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Re: poets plea
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:26:51 AM AEST
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your poem is a beautiful as ever it seems...may you always be blessed with the eloquence you have shown over the years
Shari |
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by darkstarsk8er1989 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:45:52 AM AEST
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This is one of the best I've ever read. I relly love it. I hope to see alot more from you.
~Dark~ |
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 10:06:06 AM AEST
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"Emotional poetry" indeed! I, too, would have dropped this in that category... I've had these feelings more often than not lately and know how unsettling they can be. Worst of all, I think, is when there is much... in there... that just won't break the surface.
I've written a few pieces like this myself. Sometimes, doing so pushes open that invisible door and a bit of the "more" tumbles out behind it. I do so hope it is that way for you. This, in and of itself, though is something to be proud of. Well done!
~Snemmy |
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 10:54:16 AM AEST
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I hear ya girlfriend.
it's so good to see somthing from u.
I'm a recllluse too these days but most of the time I enjoy it.
Good work girl cause I think all poets can relate.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 11:21:24 AM AEST
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Ahh Nessa my dear friend. It's been too long since we've spoken. I too have practically given up writing. What dribble I put into ink these days I wouldnt post on a bathroom wall.
You, however, even in your writer's agony still have a voice that touches the heart.
Very well done and sadly, very relatable to me.
Roses
Larry |
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:02:19 PM AEST
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Sometimes, Nessa, life goes well beyond words. Yours are beautiful, but life has to be truly lived and not just written. I too am not writing like I once did, but then I have a life now to live that is not behind a computer screen. I write when I need to. The rest of the time I live in the real world. Seems we have the ability to have the best of both, when needed.
Smiles,
Rita |
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by Willofree on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:53:24 PM AEST
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Very well penned for someone whose pen is going dry. I don't think our source of material ever dries up... I just think sometimes our inner resources are not in focus and we don't look in the right places.
Poem is well done,
Will
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 02:25:05 PM AEST
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Nessa, you verse is as beautiful as always and ohhhhh how Iv missed you and your lovely poetry. Through the dry spells the ink shall flow again my friend, just as it did here.
Love ya
Michelle |
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 04:14:15 PM AEST
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Hey grrlfriend, your pen will never run dry!!
Maybe you'll take a few breaks every now and then....but you are a poetess at heart.....
Love ya...and miss chatting with you..
Hugs and woofies always
Jenni |
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:17:14 PM AEST
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My dear lady we have so much missed ur beautiful work. It's great to see a post by u. Sadly alot of poets can so much relate to what u have written. May ur pen always flow fluently with beautiful poetic verses forever.
*love n hugs*
~sue~ |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 04:45:02 PM AEST
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Never shall your pen run dry as long as you posess the heart you do. one of a true artist
and an eminant human being. A most lovely peice of heart felt writting.
((((LadyFawn))))
Ben |
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 06:54:17 PM AEST
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This is a really beautiful poem. You're a great poet. Your poems are really awesome and beautiful.
Take care.
Scott |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 06:16:07 PM AEST
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i wish my pen doth not run dry
this is my humble poets plea.
This is beautiful.. May you have many days to write from your heart. Yes, poems are wonderful in that they can educate a soul in one way or another.
I do not have a pet any longer, except for a lonely fly or spider, ant that comes to visit me.. my flowers are all made of material, dust is my friend lol.. without poetry, I would be lost.. for it is my baby sitter until Michael gets home to me..
Your poem here expressed a lot.. so I am letting you know.. you have helped me out many times with your writes.. hugs.. raquelLeah.. |
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by Angelic_Demon on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:20:57 PM AEST
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Aww, mom...
If you'd quit watching so many soap operas then you would probably get your creative juices flowing again :P
Anyway, this was good. :D |
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 03:10:05 AM AEST
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My Dearest Lady,
Fore you I have dearly missed, take it from me I've seen the dry side of the pen, it eats at your soul within, the ink may dry, but if you were to no longer write the world of poetry would cry. Much love from your biggest fan, a simple soldier.
The Phantom |
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by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:24:13 PM AEST
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I'm going to miss you nessa, you're a great poet. you've inspired me.
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by Archie on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 07:59:45 PM AEST
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| This is a bueatiful wish. Tho' I don't red your poems as oft as i should I am always encouraged by your words. You have a great talent for writing. |
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 10:59:20 AM AEST
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I liked this poem----------------other than that -------------I don't know what------------------------To say
Sinned |
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by Aquaelius on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:40:33 AM AEST
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It"s the best of times... and it's the worst of times. Yet whatever it may be, there's never enough time to do what I'd like to do for me. Priorities are in place for a reason, so that the little time we have can go to those who need it, but the important thing is never to look away for too long for inspiration will again find you.
A fellow recluse, wishing he could share more...
Aq. |
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by ginsdance on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 08:05:05 AM AEST
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i hope your pen doesn't run dry either... mine did for awhile. hopefully even if you have had a dry spell you'll just come back stronger than ever... i've missed u guys!!!!
Gin |
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 03:18:21 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice of poetry for a dry pen you certainly make even sadness beautiful. worry not it's there and just waiting for that right moment. in any case you paint a most pretty picture.
((((Nessa))))
Ben |
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by colinb on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 05:14:08 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written Nessa |
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 03:41:04 PM AEST
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I think it's safe to say your heartfelt poetry always reaches into some lives here. This presents like writer's block, but is enveloped in so much clarity of thought, that I daresay it is anything but.
My humble plea is that your ink never runs dry either, friend. :)
~Scorp |
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