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[sid] => 114251
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Redemption
[time] => 2006-02-04 17:02:34
[hometext] => Your finger will strike the last blow to my shattered heart,and I will do anything for redemption.
[bodytext] => "Youre never around during the crucial times Youre not sure what's important to you You only chase after novelties Someones sick of you" "Ill save the things I believe in" I say "The angels are good at excuses, but gods also good at lying." Reflected in your eyes, to you my tears are all phony In the end I knew you must be smiling... "In order to get something, you have to lose something and someone will be hurt" you say Your finger will strike the last blow to my shattered heart,and I will do anything for redemption. "At a churchs rusted Maria, offer up a prayer The trembling that even steals away the light will not be forgiven Even if you close your eyes, the completely forgotten boy Will continue concealing traces of his sin on his wrists Keep whispering to your mothers rotting corpse And lose the bouquet youre holding and your past form There is no pain... don't cry anymore... If you want peace... Ill grant it as youve wished... There is no fear... come close... So that you can be untainted... Ill take it all away from you... There is no one else who can save you." I tried to do a transition, it didnt quite come out as I wanted. It was supposed to be someone innocent being manipulated by anothers words. I hope everyone gets that. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 13 [informant] => RAGEyourDREAM [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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