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Array ( [sid] => 11425 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Waste OF Skin [time] => 2003-01-27 18:20:00 [hometext] => My very first rant...hahaha...I don't know what brought this on...but I like the poem, and I hope the guys that read it don't get too offended! [bodytext] => Frail, weak, a waste of skin…
Competing with men is an unthinkable sin
Unqualified, unjustified
A piece of trash
A sex object for men to criticize, and bash
A flake, a *****
or just a good l**…
But of course, I’m a whore
So, what can I say?
I gossip, I cheat
I’m great in the sack
I don’t get hurt when I’m stabbed in the back
I’m worthless, I’m selfish
I love to complain
If it wasn’t for men
I’d go completely insane
I exaggerate, I humiliate
I make accusations
The slightest thing makes me lose concentration
Lucky ME for being born!
To serve men, the "ultimate bearer’s of porn”
A sex so superior, I should grovel, and bow
And accept that I’m just a fat worthless cow
Who cares if they beat us
Who cares if they kill
We will hold nothing against them
We will love them still
My sister is pregnant, but that’s okay
“The ***** deserved it anyway”
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Fiona [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

A Waste OF Skin

Contributed by Fiona on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Frail, weak, a waste of skin…
Competing with men is an unthinkable sin
Unqualified, unjustified
A piece of trash
A sex object for men to criticize, and bash
A flake, a *****
or just a good l**…
But of course, I’m a whore
So, what can I say?
I gossip, I cheat
I’m great in the sack
I don’t get hurt when I’m stabbed in the back
I’m worthless, I’m selfish
I love to complain
If it wasn’t for men
I’d go completely insane
I exaggerate, I humiliate
I make accusations
The slightest thing makes me lose concentration
Lucky ME for being born!
To serve men, the "ultimate bearer’s of porn”
A sex so superior, I should grovel, and bow
And accept that I’m just a fat worthless cow
Who cares if they beat us
Who cares if they kill
We will hold nothing against them
We will love them still
My sister is pregnant, but that’s okay
“The ***** deserved it anyway”

Copyright Â© Fiona ... [ 2003-01-27 18:20:00]
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Re: A Waste OF Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 10:34:18 PM AEST
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I just wanted to clarify this poem a little bit..I let a few people read it at school and they totally took it the wrong way. When I am describing what "women" are, I am being very sarcastic. Some people didn't get that, they thought I was actually bashing myself, and bashing women. This poem is very one sided, placing the spotlight on men.
Oh yeah, the last line is from the man's point of view and that is why it is in " "
I just don't want to offend anyone....hehe...I have no problem with either sexes, I just thought it was a really interesting topic. Thank u for reading. Luv, *Fiona*

Re: A Waste OF Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:53:30 PM AEST
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well..at least you aren't vain..LMAO

Re: A Waste OF Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:54:33 PM AEST
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I understood the sarcasm - you expressed it very well - I really enjoyed this poem. Excellent write.

Re: A Waste OF Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 03:11:02 AM AEST
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I think I would have liked this more if u were speaking from personal experience or if u actually felt that way. The truth is some men are like that. The nice guys like me dont get the girls. IN any case good poem

Bobo (Joel)

Re: A Waste OF Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 10:24:38 PM AEST
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Oh, I was definitely talking from experience! I just didn't want to make it seem like ALL guys are horrible, because thats not true....Sorry about that. Thanks for the comments though.
*Fiona*

Re: A Waste OF Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by merge on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 01:57:54 AM AEST
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Wow! Very impressed! I like the use of sarcasm to justify the means of the poetry. It has some nice shock value and sometimes that's what at statment needs. Luv ya babe!
Nats

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