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Array ( [sid] => 114232 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Angel. [time] => 2006-02-04 11:05:54 [hometext] => just another one of my poems!! Feel free to comment ....This is short... [bodytext] => There was this actual angel and she was eating a apple and the angel said it was awful.
The angel was bashful and the angel had a beagle and the beagle ate a beetle.

Then the angel went over to the bottel and brought her some water.
The angel wanted her some cable and she was careful to not getting rip off on her cable.
It started drizzle and she came uncheerful.
The angel loved cereal and she was always hopeful and helpful.

Then the angel saw the devil and was so SHOCKED!! ... SHE CRIED OH NO....

After all of this she was so uncheerful and cried .....
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The Angel.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:05:54 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

There was this actual angel and she was eating a apple and the angel said it was awful.
The angel was bashful and the angel had a beagle and the beagle ate a beetle.

Then the angel went over to the bottel and brought her some water.
The angel wanted her some cable and she was careful to not getting rip off on her cable.
It started drizzle and she came uncheerful.
The angel loved cereal and she was always hopeful and helpful.

Then the angel saw the devil and was so SHOCKED!! ... SHE CRIED OH NO....

After all of this she was so uncheerful and cried .....

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-02-04 11:05:54]
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Re: The Angel. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 01:58:06 PM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
huggs,
emy
The angel shouldn't be a fraid as they are huge and strong.

Re: The Angel. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 02:42:34 AM AEST
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once again u astound me but it was in a good way nice peice of poetry in your usual
yourself, style of just being u, and getting away with it. now that's a true artist.

Ben

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