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Array ( [sid] => 114169 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can`t make a woman my friend [time] => 2006-02-02 20:16:27 [hometext] => I don`t know about anyone else but I can not be true friends with a woman it never works comments welcome [bodytext] => Son of a gun i've done it again
I've made the mistake of making a woman my friend
just as she started to feel too much
all I wanted was for us to touch

she wanted to call me just to talk
go by the beach just to walk
only one thing was on my mind
that one thing was so hard to find

I'd think of her body and reach for her hand
but she'd want to talk about things I don't understand
I knew I messed up when I said i'd be there
now she believes that I really care

she hates sports and talks too much
I can't listen and never get to touch
I got to find a way for this to end
cause I never meant to make a woman my friend

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => outlaw_mutiny [notes] => ....edited for spelling as requested...by mod_6......03-02-06 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I can`t make a woman my friend

Contributed by outlaw_mutiny on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 08:16:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Son of a gun i've done it again
I've made the mistake of making a woman my friend
just as she started to feel too much
all I wanted was for us to touch

she wanted to call me just to talk
go by the beach just to walk
only one thing was on my mind
that one thing was so hard to find

I'd think of her body and reach for her hand
but she'd want to talk about things I don't understand
I knew I messed up when I said i'd be there
now she believes that I really care

she hates sports and talks too much
I can't listen and never get to touch
I got to find a way for this to end
cause I never meant to make a woman my friend

Copyright © outlaw_mutiny ... [ 2006-02-02 20:16:27]
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Re: I can`t make a woman my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Jrtoews on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 08:40:27 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem its so true members of the opposite sex can rarely be friends guys have done that to me many times and i have done that to guys it just doesnt work thats why you just need to tell people from the begining your intentions are. being honest is key

Re: I can`t make a woman my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 08:39:15 PM AEST
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Yeah, I see where you are coming from. This poem reminds me of the movie "When Harry Met Sally" have you seen it? Anyhoo, good poem, very honest.

Re: I can`t make a woman my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Kaori_Mizuki on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 05:21:58 PM AEST
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This is true most of the time. Members of the opposite sex usually can't be friends with one another because of their differences whether they be that she hates sports or he hates shopping....etc. You can have friends that are women, they just have some more things in common than the usual ones that you have met.

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