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[aid] => mick
[title] => ...Loves Lullabies...
[time] => 2006-02-02 19:28:59
[hometext] => Another co-write with the incredibly talented, Eddy (Kenty)Thanks for co-writing with me, Eddy. You're a star.
[bodytext] => We looked into each others eyes
With love for all to see
I knew from that moment on
That you were the one for me
For when we are together
All of our worries are gone
We take to lifes dance floor
And waltz together as one
Whispering voices fill our ears
Sweet nothings fill the air
Our hearts they beat in unison
For nothing can compare
No words can describe our love
Poetry can't state the rhyme
For our devotion to one another
Will stand the test of time
As we stand here staring
Into each others eyes
We drift off into dreams
And sing loves sweet lullabies...
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[ratings] => 9
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...Loves Lullabies...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 07:28:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We looked into each others eyes
With love for all to see
I knew from that moment on
That you were the one for me
For when we are together
All of our worries are gone
We take to lifes dance floor
And waltz together as one
Whispering voices fill our ears
Sweet nothings fill the air
Our hearts they beat in unison
For nothing can compare
No words can describe our love
Poetry can't state the rhyme
For our devotion to one another
Will stand the test of time
As we stand here staring
Into each others eyes
We drift off into dreams
And sing loves sweet lullabies...
Copyright ©
eternal_dreamer
... [
2006-02-02 19:28:59]
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 08:04:34 PM AEST
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Oh Sue..this is so wonderful...I love it and you two were meant to write together...... Alone, you are both talented....together, you make magic....
Keep them coming...
Jenni |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST
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Susie Q this was truly beautiful. I'm so glad to be reading a happy poem from you.
I agree with Jenni, you and Eddy write so beautifully together. I can't tell you how
touching this one is in particular. Just lovely!
*love and hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 10:03:08 AM AEST
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| This is just my kind of poem. Great write. Can't wait to read more....Mike |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 07:53:35 PM AEST
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| You are both stars in my heart and mind. Talent flowing freely here. The very best kind of read. Susie Roo, you and the Guv collaborate beautifully. Love, Rita |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 10:57:33 PM AEST
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It's beautiful..
both of you have come together so well in this..
it reminds me of wedding vows..
very touching-
B |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Kaori_Mizuki on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 05:30:06 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem. can't wait to read more. |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 06:22:59 PM AEST
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More simply written than most of what I've
read by you, but really good nonetheless. I
think the perceived simpleness of the poem
made it better instead of being all wordy and
hard to understand it was just laid out so
everyone could grasp the meaning. Great job
you two!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 12:53:05 AM AEST
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Love this, this is sweet and touches the soul,
Hugs,
LG |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 01:50:11 AM AEST
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| simply amazing |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:58:06 PM AEST
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| This poem is very pretty, soft and gentle. raquelleah |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 05:09:18 PM AEST
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This is soo beautiful.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 09:20:39 PM AEST
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wo this is good friends.
I honestly can't where one ends and the begins. It fits together like a snug glove.
Good work from u both.
huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:26:56 AM AEST
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I have just come across the work of Kenty, and not so long ago began to read your work. This poem is exquisite and gentle. It displays a tandem of very talented poets. Both of whom are among the best here at YPDC. Great job! Can't wait to read more.
- SCM |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:18:16 AM AEST
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Very touching write. It's always good to have someone in our lives that makes us feel that good isn't it:)
Hugs* Lo |
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Re: ...Loves Lullabies...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 11:51:48 PM AEST
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A treasure of poetic beautiy 2 behold Sue a lovely colaberation between 2 giants and well seasoned artist. u and eddy splendid in every scence of the word along with your usual magic.
((((Sue))))
Ben |
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