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There's aways a different story; a story in our heads. Playing a different game for everyday; making plans to stay. When we're ripped apart, we never feel the same.
The actions of others change us forever. We don't have to say anything to make a difference. From the backs of our brains into the light, we've always known we were meant for greater lives.
We can feel the passage of time as we lie in our beds; we feel it wash us clean, ebbing away our sins. When a gun is pointed at our heads, we're never afraid, we know it will come.
When the actions of others come crashing down on us, we will stand and take it no matter what.
When death takes us down, our souls will fly free. Nothing can hold us down, we are what we see. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 21 [informant] => MG_Akela22090 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Flying Free

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:31:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

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There's aways a different story; a story in our heads. Playing a different game for everyday; making plans to stay. When we're ripped apart, we never feel the same.
The actions of others change us forever. We don't have to say anything to make a difference. From the backs of our brains into the light, we've always known we were meant for greater lives.
We can feel the passage of time as we lie in our beds; we feel it wash us clean, ebbing away our sins. When a gun is pointed at our heads, we're never afraid, we know it will come.
When the actions of others come crashing down on us, we will stand and take it no matter what.
When death takes us down, our souls will fly free. Nothing can hold us down, we are what we see.

Copyright © MG_Akela22090 ... [ 2006-02-02 18:31:39]
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Re: Flying Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 10:22:20 PM AEST
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You are right. I can relate to this. This was a great poem keep it up!!

Re: Flying Free (User Rating: 1 )
by scanman77 on Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 12:35:28 PM AEST
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Great poem. Keep up the good work.

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