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Array ( [sid] => 114140 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Release [time] => 2006-02-02 10:06:04 [hometext] => Strange little number I wrote while I was high in class. Doesn't make any sense, terrible English, but I have an excuse, right? [bodytext] =>


It is not simply a motif
Reason is this right for our relief?
Do the purging of words and never leave
This is our manner of time to grieve
Release not always of the suicide
But of the proof that we are alive
Let us try to hide us in the tears we cry
Regard nothing us to have the truth we hide
Is we are all so much very alone
With a broken Heart and a broken home
(Where is all the order? Will we be always be really healthy and safe?)
Which is the colour of the pain?
Is the answer under the rain?
It is poetry with a cutter and this?
It is how we survive


[comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 13 [informant] => vermilion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Our Release

Contributed by vermilion on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 10:06:04 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry






It is not simply a motif
Reason is this right for our relief?
Do the purging of words and never leave
This is our manner of time to grieve
Release not always of the suicide
But of the proof that we are alive
Let us try to hide us in the tears we cry
Regard nothing us to have the truth we hide
Is we are all so much very alone
With a broken Heart and a broken home
(Where is all the order? Will we be always be really healthy and safe?)
Which is the colour of the pain?
Is the answer under the rain?
It is poetry with a cutter and this?
It is how we survive






Copyright © vermilion ... [ 2006-02-02 10:06:04]
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Re: Our Release (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 04:47:17 PM AEST
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...how could I resist your intro...had to take a peek...I like it...it addresses pretty much all the unanswered questions of mankind...I liked the awkward wording sometimes...just high enough...I wrote a poem after drinking a whole bottle of wine...couldn't coordinate my fingers on the keyboard...it was so sad...I won't change any of the typos...it makes it...

...stay healthy,

ron...enigma




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