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Array ( [sid] => 114120 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Listen to me now.. [time] => 2006-02-01 21:21:55 [hometext] => written tonight [bodytext] => Listen to me now
And know this day by day
We will do this again
And will not look back
I will fix what went wrong
Even though I have not a clue
The sun will rise
Above my head
My body that didnt sleep
Will walk in the light
I cannot sleep
It has been too long
And I wont let go this time
I will make it all right
I cannot help but weep
I shall see this world done
And see the new one born
I shall see me change
And witness me born anew
I will do it all
To listen to the music
And dance to it's tune
Let it carry my body
Right over the cliff
And I shall fall
Like I have so many times before
To see I am unworthy
Just another screw up
I cannot satisfy anyone
Where have I gone wrong?
What happened to all those tries
And I sit here and cry
Not knowing what to do
If this were paper
It would be stained with tears
I was born by love
Living on hate for them all
Will I lose this one too?
Will I be crushed?
I am nothing
Unable to even love right
What do I do, lord...
To make it all right...
What do I do, love...
To make you alright...
What do you do, Tim...
To stop these cursed tears? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 19 [informant] => rationality [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Listen to me now..

Contributed by rationality on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 09:21:55 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Listen to me now
And know this day by day
We will do this again
And will not look back
I will fix what went wrong
Even though I have not a clue
The sun will rise
Above my head
My body that didnt sleep
Will walk in the light
I cannot sleep
It has been too long
And I wont let go this time
I will make it all right
I cannot help but weep
I shall see this world done
And see the new one born
I shall see me change
And witness me born anew
I will do it all
To listen to the music
And dance to it's tune
Let it carry my body
Right over the cliff
And I shall fall
Like I have so many times before
To see I am unworthy
Just another screw up
I cannot satisfy anyone
Where have I gone wrong?
What happened to all those tries
And I sit here and cry
Not knowing what to do
If this were paper
It would be stained with tears
I was born by love
Living on hate for them all
Will I lose this one too?
Will I be crushed?
I am nothing
Unable to even love right
What do I do, lord...
To make it all right...
What do I do, love...
To make you alright...
What do you do, Tim...
To stop these cursed tears?




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Re: Listen to me now.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:47:44 PM AEST
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Wow....This is so heartbreaking....but so wonderfully written. Kudos.


Re: Listen to me now.. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:30:45 PM AEST
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Well once they've read this awesome write they will melt into it like I jus did and if they don't then?????
Very strong write.
luv, huggs,
emy




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