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And dive right in
Into my next step
It's a shame it's come down to this

I'm by far the worst off
You'll all be saved
And I'll still be wondering where I went wrong

If you care at all about me
You'll say I'm better than you
It's the only way to save me
From the black hole I've come to be [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 61 [informant] => the_story_of_the_year [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Black Hole

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 04:43:56 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I take a deep breath
And dive right in
Into my next step
It's a shame it's come down to this

I'm by far the worst off
You'll all be saved
And I'll still be wondering where I went wrong

If you care at all about me
You'll say I'm better than you
It's the only way to save me
From the black hole I've come to be

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2006-02-01 16:43:56]
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Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 11:38:30 AM AEST
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I always get that feeling where it just seems everyone is better then you and no matter how many times you look at their life or how many different perspectives you take they always seem to have a better life then you.. I like this poem and i can relate..

take care
christina

Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:25:47 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this poem. I feel at times that everyone in this world are better than me. The people in my life are WAY too good for me and deserve better. You are not alone. This is a great write

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