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[aid] => mick
[title] => Undone
[time] => 2006-02-01 10:45:43
[hometext] => There are times that families go thru many struggles in the couse of life ... This is my view of some of those struggles.
[bodytext] => 
Thank you Nazzy and Breezy for helping make this happen.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 302
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[informant] => LoveStruck_Hippie
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
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Undone
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:45:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thank you Nazzy and Breezy for helping make this happen.
Copyright ©
LoveStruck_Hippie
... [
2006-02-01 10:45:43]
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Re: Undone
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by kidnic on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:04:24 AM AEST
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| My God... great poem... |
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Re: Undone
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by moses on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:15:16 PM AEST
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| Like it a lot, keep it up. One of the best I've read so far on this site. |
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Re: Undone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:32:01 PM AEST
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aw ... you sweet girl. I didn't do anything hun. It was all you.
I love how you presented this. So very imaginative.
That first stanza ... gosh ... *shudders* that's cold chicklet!
Masterful use of imagery, hun. A very powerful write.
~Breezy
(and thanks for ... well, just for everything. *hugs*) |
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Re: Undone
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 05:41:15 PM AEST
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By far an outstanding piece of poetry filled with much sadness and pain. You've done a remarkable job and the presentation is absolutely sensational. With the help of two other wonderful poets you have presented us with an extraordinary piece of poetry. Thank u and well done.
*warm hugs*
~*~sue~*~ |
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Re: Undone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:34:11 PM AEST
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| A wonderful poem. Nice work. Keep it up.. |
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Re: Undone
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:23:21 AM AEST
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| Wonderful, wonderful write and I love the way it is presented. Beautiful. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Undone
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by wizard on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 04:36:57 PM AEST
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this was a great write...very intense.
wiz |
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Re: Undone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:26:35 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and sad and thruthful. A poem that paints who you are for all to see.
I like what i read and see and hear your heart as it's voice cries out with pain. A most lovely
peice of writting.
Ben |
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Re: Undone
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:12:33 PM AEST
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i love the flow of this write
simple and beautiful, very expressive
peach |
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Re: Undone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:47:15 AM AEST
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Not just the words but the whole way this is presented is pretty cool stuff.
More than impressive.
J. |
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Re: Undone
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:32:49 PM AEST
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| It sounds to me like you have a lot of family issues, as do I. for you to be able to channel that into something as good as this is true talent. |
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Re: Undone
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by wheels on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 01:29:13 AM AEST
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| great poem, but I like your free-style better - Im partial to it. |
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