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Had you succeeded
I would feel
Nothing
But anger, grief
For the loss of life
That was much too
Brief
Baby Girl
The world would have
Never known
Your kindness, gentle touch
Oh my baby girl
The world would have
Lost
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Baby Girl

Contributed by Leslie on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 11:40:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Oh my baby girl
Had you succeeded
I would feel
Nothing
But anger, grief
For the loss of life
That was much too
Brief
Baby Girl
The world would have
Never known
Your kindness, gentle touch
Oh my baby girl
The world would have
Lost
Too much

Copyright © Leslie ... [ 2006-01-31 23:40:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Baby Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 02:54:08 AM AEST
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Short and to the point with a lot of emotion. Sad write. I liked it though. Nice work.

Re: Baby Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:58:59 AM AEST
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That one got me good. Excellent, powerful and extremely saddening.

Re: Baby Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 11:52:48 PM AEST
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Please accept my deepest regrets leslie..
assuming this were written in a literal sense-

My thoughts and pryer to you Luv..
Peace to you..

Most humbly..

Billy

Re: Baby Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 01:52:43 PM AEST
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Really touching...very emotional write.....
Well done..
Jenni

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