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Array ( [sid] => 114034 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beginnings and Dreams [time] => 2006-01-31 13:50:14 [hometext] => This poem expresses how and what I never expected the relationship between my 10 yr.old son and I would be, as a single mother. [bodytext] => Beginnings and Dreams:

He settles me when he smiles at me.
It's when our eyes meet, his gift I can see.
Sometimes I wonder if he came from a dream;
a dream back in time forgotten in me.

I never thought a love so true
could remind me when young, my cares so few.
I'd sink in blue sky
from the grass came my view
with no imagination of what
dream would come true.

The day, still so clear in my mind
when the doctors gave us this child to inner twine.
Small was this child yet so strong I believe
from all he withstood through his dad's time with me;
the despair with excitement of things that should be
and the uncertainty that has followed us from him inside me.

And yet things still remain much the same.

Now my son and I, in cool grass do we lie.
-together we look up and we sink in blue sky.
And this time that we share are beginning of dreams
even for him
these dreams yet to be seen.
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Beginnings and Dreams

Contributed by PiedmontGirl on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 01:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Beginnings and Dreams:

He settles me when he smiles at me.
It's when our eyes meet, his gift I can see.
Sometimes I wonder if he came from a dream;
a dream back in time forgotten in me.

I never thought a love so true
could remind me when young, my cares so few.
I'd sink in blue sky
from the grass came my view
with no imagination of what
dream would come true.

The day, still so clear in my mind
when the doctors gave us this child to inner twine.
Small was this child yet so strong I believe
from all he withstood through his dad's time with me;
the despair with excitement of things that should be
and the uncertainty that has followed us from him inside me.

And yet things still remain much the same.

Now my son and I, in cool grass do we lie.
-together we look up and we sink in blue sky.
And this time that we share are beginning of dreams
even for him
these dreams yet to be seen.

Copyright © PiedmontGirl ... [ 2006-01-31 13:50:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Beginnings and Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:55:38 PM AEST
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tender write filled with fun love
Michelle

Re: Beginnings and Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 03:13:48 PM AEST
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Pure love and wonder well expressed by a loving mother. It's beautiful!
BH

Re: Beginnings and Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 03:57:13 PM AEST
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lovely write. You captured well how the past repeats itself and many things from yerself can be found in yer offspring. I'm a single mum of 2 meself and I often wonder if I did well by making the decission to raise them on me own. I just have to look at them to see I made right choice. The love children give and how pure it is, without asking for much in return is often forgotten by us parents. You captured well with yer words that it is the lil things in life that count. Such as, well written by you, just laying in the grass looking up to the sky. A nice moment to relax..and get in touch with yer lil one.

Huggsss,

Nats.

Re: Beginnings and Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:38:34 AM AEST
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A lovely lovely poem. Aren't children great? :-) They are proof that love at first sight exists For that matter, at first existence....knowing they are there is instant love.

A beautiful write!

Thank you for sharing and take care.

Tim
:-)

Re: Beginnings and Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 12:18:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. It was written with pure love in your heart..

take care
christina

Re: Beginnings and Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 02:09:24 PM AEST
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This is a lovely beautiful poem.

Take care.

Scott

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