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Array ( [sid] => 114022 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => mbt [time] => 2006-01-31 00:36:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => beauty established
like a base that confronted the lines of me
incredibility that consumed us
turning over and over just trying to just be

blown away into nothing
the conspiracy of what I like to call me
sitting on top of the world tonight
rolling around together waiting for sensing see

our eyes mold into pale blue
with amber crusts embedding themselves into truth
we come into our own answers
explaining that our being is everything as I come into you

it was considered a disaster
with all the skeptics sitting so inconspicuously
I sat alone in doubt and torment
but awoke in self indulgence and so happily

smiled from my ankles
all the way to the top of my brain
I sat in the most wonderful of company
and tried not to complain

that it was not just you and me
and wonder broke into my mind
I saw the first glimpse of happiness
And wondered of you as mine [comments] => 3 [counter] => 270 [topic] => 2 [informant] => exodus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

mbt

Contributed by exodus on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:36:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

beauty established
like a base that confronted the lines of me
incredibility that consumed us
turning over and over just trying to just be

blown away into nothing
the conspiracy of what I like to call me
sitting on top of the world tonight
rolling around together waiting for sensing see

our eyes mold into pale blue
with amber crusts embedding themselves into truth
we come into our own answers
explaining that our being is everything as I come into you

it was considered a disaster
with all the skeptics sitting so inconspicuously
I sat alone in doubt and torment
but awoke in self indulgence and so happily

smiled from my ankles
all the way to the top of my brain
I sat in the most wonderful of company
and tried not to complain

that it was not just you and me
and wonder broke into my mind
I saw the first glimpse of happiness
And wondered of you as mine

Copyright © exodus ... [ 2006-01-31 00:36:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: mbt (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:35:31 AM AEST
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u have magic fingers that dance accross the screen with many magic words.
huggs, big smiles,
emy

Re: mbt (User Rating: 1 )
by reecy on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:14:49 AM AEST
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Very beutiful nice choice of words. Not too clear on the meaning? but truely nice write

Re: mbt (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:24:25 PM AEST
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Imaginative and colorful, this poem is so unique, I LOVE IT!!!!!!! ( i dont know why but it reminds me of a Dave Mathews song )

Great write,

LG

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