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Array ( [sid] => 114018 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As one receives the other loses [time] => 2006-01-30 22:46:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Throughout life we lose so much

Throughout life we receive as much

As we lose the things we want and need

We never think about the people who receive

When you lose the thing you love

Someone out there receives what they’ve always loved

When you lose something

Don’t think so negatively about it

Out there in the world people lose a lot more

It is just your time to lose

But the time will come where you will receive

The time will come where you will be happy

If you’re not so happy already

Just think about what you already have

And that will always make you happy

Don’t be sad about the things you lose

Just think about how happy you were when you had it

You will always have one thing which is so hard to lose

And never think about losing it

because lots of people lost it without wanting to lose it …



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As one receives the other loses

Contributed by zalzool on Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 10:46:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Throughout life we lose so much

Throughout life we receive as much

As we lose the things we want and need

We never think about the people who receive

When you lose the thing you love

Someone out there receives what they’ve always loved

When you lose something

Don’t think so negatively about it

Out there in the world people lose a lot more

It is just your time to lose

But the time will come where you will receive

The time will come where you will be happy

If you’re not so happy already

Just think about what you already have

And that will always make you happy

Don’t be sad about the things you lose

Just think about how happy you were when you had it

You will always have one thing which is so hard to lose

And never think about losing it

because lots of people lost it without wanting to lose it …



*** LIFE ***




Copyright © zalzool ... [ 2006-01-30 22:46:24]
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Re: As one receives the other loses (User Rating: 1 )
by Leslie on Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 11:39:48 PM AEST
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Interesting but too redundant




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