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Array ( [sid] => 113966 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fresh Hot Fecal Matter [time] => 2006-01-29 21:15:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Black silk
Drapes her thighs
Her shaven legs rise
The heart pounds its last lullaby

A black sky
Thunderous bolt
Tumultuous throat
Moisture gathers on her hand
Perspiring pituitary gland
As the heat is kindled
To a softening beat
Of a dreary dwindle
Chemicals in command

The black earth
Unsoiled deposits of dirt
Bathe her in muddy waters
Engaged in the bloody showers
Without desire and order
With open- ended closure
Abrupt, stop, drop and loiter
Litter the tar gutter,
With ounces of fresh fecal matter,
Used condoms
Triangular lubricated filter
Fit into the blended mixture
An addendum
Added to the latent picture
Much there after
Choked cocked laughter
Strangulated passion
Intimidated private inspector
A plainly dressed detective
A sworn poor- person protector
To no avail
Even the black rain rejects her


The black sea
Engulfs her human being
A placenta ensuing and ensuring
Warmth, shelter, and maternal loving, looming
With a quick snip
Of the scissor whip
Begins a new loss, neonatal, infantile grieving

Her black shadow
Follows
For a half life, then
Disassociates with it host
It is only the object, the silk, that keeps her protected and securely enclosed

____________________________
__________________________________
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Fresh Hot Fecal Matter

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 09:15:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Black silk
Drapes her thighs
Her shaven legs rise
The heart pounds its last lullaby

A black sky
Thunderous bolt
Tumultuous throat
Moisture gathers on her hand
Perspiring pituitary gland
As the heat is kindled
To a softening beat
Of a dreary dwindle
Chemicals in command

The black earth
Unsoiled deposits of dirt
Bathe her in muddy waters
Engaged in the bloody showers
Without desire and order
With open- ended closure
Abrupt, stop, drop and loiter
Litter the tar gutter,
With ounces of fresh fecal matter,
Used condoms
Triangular lubricated filter
Fit into the blended mixture
An addendum
Added to the latent picture
Much there after
Choked cocked laughter
Strangulated passion
Intimidated private inspector
A plainly dressed detective
A sworn poor- person protector
To no avail
Even the black rain rejects her


The black sea
Engulfs her human being
A placenta ensuing and ensuring
Warmth, shelter, and maternal loving, looming
With a quick snip
Of the scissor whip
Begins a new loss, neonatal, infantile grieving

Her black shadow
Follows
For a half life, then
Disassociates with it host
It is only the object, the silk, that keeps her protected and securely enclosed

____________________________
__________________________________




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Re: Fresh Hot Fecal Matter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 04:15:07 PM AEST
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Very... interesting, for lack of a better word. Your descriptions were great.
Definately a great piece of work!


Re: Fresh Hot Fecal Matter (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 02:14:39 AM AEST
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Good write takes the reader right with you down to the dark depths.

Whisper




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