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Array ( [sid] => 113926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Missing You [time] => 2006-01-29 01:00:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I miss the days we use to share.
Why do you treat me so unfair?
I loved you as much as I could,
You might not believe me but I think you should.
I gave my heart to you
Now you treat me wrong and make me feel blue.
Tell me how you feel?
Don't lie just be real.
I think about you every day.
Why won't this feeling fade away?
I loved you from the start.
I should not have given you my heart.
I gave you all that could be given.
I'm suprised that I'm still standing and still livin'.
Hopefully you will realize what you had.
And hopefully I'll be saying "Oh boy, that's to bad."
I never loved someone like this.
I will always love you and your smile, I will
definitely miss.

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Missing You

Contributed by Marisol on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 01:00:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I miss the days we use to share.
Why do you treat me so unfair?
I loved you as much as I could,
You might not believe me but I think you should.
I gave my heart to you
Now you treat me wrong and make me feel blue.
Tell me how you feel?
Don't lie just be real.
I think about you every day.
Why won't this feeling fade away?
I loved you from the start.
I should not have given you my heart.
I gave you all that could be given.
I'm suprised that I'm still standing and still livin'.
Hopefully you will realize what you had.
And hopefully I'll be saying "Oh boy, that's to bad."
I never loved someone like this.
I will always love you and your smile, I will
definitely miss.

Copyright © Marisol ... [ 2006-01-29 01:00:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:19:30 AM AEST
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You should rethink your perception of love, love is not selfish - don't love someone so they should love you back. Love forgives and accepts - doesn't discriminate or judge people. Read the Bible, it's all there :) and good luck.

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:31:27 AM AEST
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Nice write. I can relate. Everything will work out in the end, you'll see. :-) Keep writing!

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