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Array ( [sid] => 113919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Just Can't [time] => 2006-01-28 20:39:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm ripped in half
I can't do this anymore
There's just too much
And no time
I'm so tired
I just want to sleep
There's too much to do
Too much to handle
And no one cares
I want time to freeze
I want everything to go away
I want someone to help
But no one will
I know what I'm doing wrong
What can I do right
When will someone help
When will there be time [comments] => 3 [counter] => 481 [topic] => 61 [informant] => lil_pup91 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I Just Can't

Contributed by lil_pup91 on Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 08:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I'm ripped in half
I can't do this anymore
There's just too much
And no time
I'm so tired
I just want to sleep
There's too much to do
Too much to handle
And no one cares
I want time to freeze
I want everything to go away
I want someone to help
But no one will
I know what I'm doing wrong
What can I do right
When will someone help
When will there be time

Copyright © lil_pup91 ... [ 2006-01-28 20:39:10]
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Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 08:47:25 PM AEST
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You have expressed yourself here very well. Wonderful write. I can relate. Hang in there. When you get down, put that pen or pencil to paper, I find it very therapeutic. Keep sharing. Peace, Laura

Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:19:12 AM AEST
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Great write. I could really sense your frustration. We've all been there. Keep writing!

Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 08:14:40 PM AEST
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i find myself here a lot
but i found the answer to everything
which always picks me up
good write

catz

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