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Array ( [sid] => 113878 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is another one of my poem stars. [time] => 2006-01-27 21:36:42 [hometext] => JUST ANOTHER ONE OF MY POEMS .. FEEL FREE TO COMMENT^_^THIS IS SHORT... [bodytext] => I love the stars and I dont like bars.

I once lived in a boxcar and a car.

I dont like cigars and crossbars I once had to use a crowbar on my car.

The drawers in my house had a collect of cars.

I once wanted a flatcar and a guitar and a jaguas , that I could put into a jar.

I once wanted to travel to mars and to see the stars .

The streets were feel with sidecars and you heard the sound of radars all around you.

And there was this man who was on the streets who had a scar from falling onto the tar road.

But at least our jaguas doesn't have stars are radars on it...

But from all of this all I ever wanted to do is see the stars and mars.

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This is another one of my poem stars.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I love the stars and I dont like bars.

I once lived in a boxcar and a car.

I dont like cigars and crossbars I once had to use a crowbar on my car.

The drawers in my house had a collect of cars.

I once wanted a flatcar and a guitar and a jaguas , that I could put into a jar.

I once wanted to travel to mars and to see the stars .

The streets were feel with sidecars and you heard the sound of radars all around you.

And there was this man who was on the streets who had a scar from falling onto the tar road.

But at least our jaguas doesn't have stars are radars on it...

But from all of this all I ever wanted to do is see the stars and mars.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-27 21:36:42]
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Re: This is another one of my poem stars. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:42:56 PM AEST
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intersting write
Michelle

Re: This is another one of my poem stars. (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:44:29 PM AEST
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What does it all mean? I feel like I am missing something. To me it is a lot of words that just rhyme. Are you being silly or serious?

"I once lived in a boxcar and a car" ??
"I don't like cigars and crossbars I once had to use a crowbar on my car"

Like Dr.Suess sort of. Interesting. Peace, Laura

Re: This is another one of my poem stars. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 01:23:45 AM AEST
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Yes, and sometimes we just have to get through all those other things, in order to get to where we truly want to be. Another wisdom write here, thank you.... love it... raquelLeah

Re: This is another one of my poem stars. (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:20:14 PM AEST
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Nice little bit of fluff this :-) Lite and airy. But what are jaguas? LOL Just curious..:-)

Whisper

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