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[sid] => 113751
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
[time] => 2006-01-25 12:50:18
[hometext] => The challenge with the writing group this month was protest poetry. I had a hard time coming up with something until a friend pointed out my 5 yr old to me! LOL
[bodytext] => I won't eat cereal
and toast is YUCK!
I'm not really hungry
What's that YOU got?
I don't LIKE those pants.
My shirt is NOT small!
I don't see why
I need to dress at all.
What can I eat?
Is that all?
No, I'd much rather
go play ball.
I don't NEED lunch,
I'm sure you'll see.
I'll wait 'till we're shopping
to finally be hungry.
I don't WANT to play outside.
I'd rather climb the hutch,
and run, and yell and shout.
Besides, you never gave me LUNCH!
I LIKE my toys
all over the floor.
I WON'T clean up,
it's such a boor.
I WON'T eat the burger
and peas make me scream.
Don't CARE if I liked it last night,
Did you say ICE CREAM?
I WON'T get pj's on,
I don't WANT to go to bed.
I didn't get to play outside!
I can't hear what you said.
Do I reeaally have to go?
Why CAN'T I sing all night?
Let me give you a hug and kiss
I love you and good night.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 548
[topic] => 7
[informant] => Winterland
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 29
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => HumorPoetry
)
I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
Contributed by
Winterland
on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:50:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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I won't eat cereal
and toast is YUCK!
I'm not really hungry
What's that YOU got?
I don't LIKE those pants.
My shirt is NOT small!
I don't see why
I need to dress at all.
What can I eat?
Is that all?
No, I'd much rather
go play ball.
I don't NEED lunch,
I'm sure you'll see.
I'll wait 'till we're shopping
to finally be hungry.
I don't WANT to play outside.
I'd rather climb the hutch,
and run, and yell and shout.
Besides, you never gave me LUNCH!
I LIKE my toys
all over the floor.
I WON'T clean up,
it's such a boor.
I WON'T eat the burger
and peas make me scream.
Don't CARE if I liked it last night,
Did you say ICE CREAM?
I WON'T get pj's on,
I don't WANT to go to bed.
I didn't get to play outside!
I can't hear what you said.
Do I reeaally have to go?
Why CAN'T I sing all night?
Let me give you a hug and kiss
I love you and good night.
Copyright ©
Winterland
... [
2006-01-25 12:50:18]
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:02:12 PM AEST
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| LOL, very nice! luved it "Did you say ice-cream?" Yummy! Thanx, made me smile :) |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:29:40 PM AEST
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| cool |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:44:15 PM AEST
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| Great write. I have a 3 yr old and a 9 yr old....this all sounds so familiar. LOL. Peace, Laura |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 03:31:13 PM AEST
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I think you did a great job with this
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 03:58:44 PM AEST
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This is precious. I have been there and done all that and going through it again with the grandsons when they visit. I feel sorry for their parents. I just go outside on the patio and thank God I am too old for children. I only play with them when they are being good, lol. Great write.
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by dance_dance on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 06:58:55 PM AEST
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| I loved it...original, yet very relatable. Great job! |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by sararose1950 on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 09:03:52 PM AEST
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so cute!! reminds me of my grandchildren
Peace and Light |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 12:06:30 PM AEST
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Too cute of a write...
As with all parents, it brought a smile to my face.
Jeff |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 10:45:39 PM AEST
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| Awww! Very cute write...and the ending is very sweet. |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 12:52:57 AM AEST
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| how cute, i loved it.. |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 06:31:50 AM AEST
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Oh this is too cuta and a little too real.
Nice write, I enjoyed it.
Jeff |
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Re: I'm Not Gonna, I Don't Want To, You can't Make Me
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 06:47:49 PM AEST
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lol.. what a riot!!
..sounds like my daughter when she was that age~
though all things considered, I'd rather have deal with that, than boys callin' the house!!
indeed!!
B |
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