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Sometimes I wonder if my life means anything at all
Swaying to the left and to the right before
Again now I've done the same
Lord God things don't ever seem to work out
So I give up hope and quit
But Lord I know that Heaven is real
And help me reach your estate
I know I'm a repeated sinner of a sin
Its hard to let go for me to win
Deep inside I say I care
But I see my actions when in despair
I'm not good enough Lord
So help me out today
Shadows of blindness never seems to get away
Lord Jesus help me thru this poem
To keep on the straight and narrow
But Please help me get rid of this
Thats keeping me from all your care
I give myself to you again
Now fill me in with all your love
Just the way you cared
Now Lord God just give me help
I really need your help

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I Need Your Help

Contributed by packatack on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 08:50:20 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Oh Dear God The Mightiest of them all
Sometimes I wonder if my life means anything at all
Swaying to the left and to the right before
Again now I've done the same
Lord God things don't ever seem to work out
So I give up hope and quit
But Lord I know that Heaven is real
And help me reach your estate
I know I'm a repeated sinner of a sin
Its hard to let go for me to win
Deep inside I say I care
But I see my actions when in despair
I'm not good enough Lord
So help me out today
Shadows of blindness never seems to get away
Lord Jesus help me thru this poem
To keep on the straight and narrow
But Please help me get rid of this
Thats keeping me from all your care
I give myself to you again
Now fill me in with all your love
Just the way you cared
Now Lord God just give me help
I really need your help

brandon

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Re: I Need Your Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:06:09 PM AEST
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God is testing your faith in him, soon the doors will open.

Re: I Need Your Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:37:43 PM AEST
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The the comment i just read, God never tests your faith, it isnt a game to him, brandon if you need help read this chapter and verse int he bible (Romans 10:9 and 10:10) thats should help and this one (Proverbs 3:11) says My son,despise not the chastening of the Lord; neither be weary of his correction.

-Tiff

Re: I Need Your Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 08:39:40 PM AEST
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Hi Brandon, you know what, I am a christian, that does not put me up above anyone else, and I mess up too, and I have to stop and think, what am I doing, and I have to once again humble myself, and call on God. This we all have to do time in again, we are not perfect humans, God knows we need Him, and we have a free will, and when we mess up, He is always there to care for us. So hang in there, don't lose your faith, even when it gets dark and dreary, He knows us, each one of us, and He knows that we can tell when we are not doing things right, its that whisper you hear from Him to tell you, I am here for you, ready and waiting. I will pray for you and your family, and thank you for praying for me and mine. I felt this way for a couple of days, today I am strong once again, so He did hear my cries. He hears yours too. huggies.. raquelLeah

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