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Burns and Burns
Burns hotter then the flames upon the sun
It burns so much it begins to ache in my heart

The cause for thsi pain inside
Is the pain and lies around our nation
The pains and lies the government does
The neglect and recklessness of the government

Their lies and hurt spreads like a plague
Sure some aren't as bad as others
But a corrupt system always lives on
We the people are the cure for this disease

We can put a stop to the spread
We can fix their wrongs
We can come together and raise the hopes of those who have lost it
We are.......The People!.........The Cure!
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The Corrupt Plague

Contributed by wis_poet on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:21:27 AM in AEST
Topic: political

The hate burns inside
Burns and Burns
Burns hotter then the flames upon the sun
It burns so much it begins to ache in my heart

The cause for thsi pain inside
Is the pain and lies around our nation
The pains and lies the government does
The neglect and recklessness of the government

Their lies and hurt spreads like a plague
Sure some aren't as bad as others
But a corrupt system always lives on
We the people are the cure for this disease

We can put a stop to the spread
We can fix their wrongs
We can come together and raise the hopes of those who have lost it
We are.......The People!.........The Cure!

Copyright © wis_poet ... [ 2006-01-25 01:21:27]
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Re: The Corrupt Plague (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:25:52 AM AEST
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I don't see u cana improve this as u definently r a wise poet.
Wise and so true.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Corrupt Plague (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:43:22 PM AEST
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u cant fix the deilvs people, all you can do is kno that you are better

Re: The Corrupt Plague (User Rating: 1 )
by ChrisSawyer on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:49:54 PM AEST
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I think you're only speaking generally. I feel as if your poetry would be better if you had a specific issue, as far as political views go.

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