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Array ( [sid] => 113736 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hate dealing with this...... [time] => 2006-01-24 22:51:08 [hometext] => To a really good friend of mine who is in the navy and he absoulitly hates it and i am kinda writing this out of his voice so tell me what you think and if i should send it to him!!!! [bodytext] => How i hate this the fact that i cant
be home with everyone i love, i have
to be so far away.
First i lose my father the guy i looked
up to my whole life, he's gone gosh
how i miss him i want him back but
i know that will never happen.
I am back and in the swing of things
and then christmas comes i get to
go home for a while thanks gosh
i need a break from here.
I am dreading the day i go back i
dont want to go back i am trying my
best to get out so i can help my mom.
I go back to what i call HELL and kinda
get back to my routen of things and then
my grandfather pass's on oh man thats
the person i was pushing for them to
let me out of here. now that he is gone
i dont know when i will be back home.
with all the people i love with my heart.
I miss my best friend, my mom, and every
one i care for, what if my grandma goes
next how am i gonna handle that.
I dk what to do anymore i want out of this
place i call HELL and go back home so i
can be happy again.
God i pray and wish and hope that i will
be back with everyone that will make me
happy and not make my life a living HELL.

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Hate dealing with this......

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:51:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



How i hate this the fact that i cant
be home with everyone i love, i have
to be so far away.
First i lose my father the guy i looked
up to my whole life, he's gone gosh
how i miss him i want him back but
i know that will never happen.
I am back and in the swing of things
and then christmas comes i get to
go home for a while thanks gosh
i need a break from here.
I am dreading the day i go back i
dont want to go back i am trying my
best to get out so i can help my mom.
I go back to what i call HELL and kinda
get back to my routen of things and then
my grandfather pass's on oh man thats
the person i was pushing for them to
let me out of here. now that he is gone
i dont know when i will be back home.
with all the people i love with my heart.
I miss my best friend, my mom, and every
one i care for, what if my grandma goes
next how am i gonna handle that.
I dk what to do anymore i want out of this
place i call HELL and go back home so i
can be happy again.
God i pray and wish and hope that i will
be back with everyone that will make me
happy and not make my life a living HELL.





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Re: Hate dealing with this...... (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:50:10 PM AEST
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very sad

feel better




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