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Because I am on a level so far above you
Infact you would be lucky
For me to even think "Of" you
My intelligence
Would put Einstien to shame
Leave you in suspence
Asking who is that fenominal dame
I'm not concieded
I'm just tired of not being noticed
The acknowledgement is needed
You all know this
Because you've been there
And you know its hard
To live a life that you cannot bare
But you cannot give up because you've came to far
So you push the evelope
Give them a taste
Tug on the rope
Make em fall flat on thier face
Show them your abilities
And leave them without a doubt
With a feeling of nobility
Your confidence begins to sprout
Then you are untouchable
Much like the heavens in the sky
An you are so capable
To spread your wings and fly
No one can touch you
Because you are unique
No blade could cut you
And no one will call you freak
Yes
Untouchable
Thats me

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Untouchable

Contributed by poetic_influence on Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 05:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

You cannot touch me
Because I am on a level so far above you
Infact you would be lucky
For me to even think "Of" you
My intelligence
Would put Einstien to shame
Leave you in suspence
Asking who is that fenominal dame
I'm not concieded
I'm just tired of not being noticed
The acknowledgement is needed
You all know this
Because you've been there
And you know its hard
To live a life that you cannot bare
But you cannot give up because you've came to far
So you push the evelope
Give them a taste
Tug on the rope
Make em fall flat on thier face
Show them your abilities
And leave them without a doubt
With a feeling of nobility
Your confidence begins to sprout
Then you are untouchable
Much like the heavens in the sky
An you are so capable
To spread your wings and fly
No one can touch you
Because you are unique
No blade could cut you
And no one will call you freak
Yes
Untouchable
Thats me

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Re: Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by TREBOR on Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 05:59:14 PM AEST
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Its an unusual poem,

I kind of feel 'superior' to people but kind of have a massive inferiority conplex at the same time

I like the style and the way you come out with a positive approach

Re: Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 05:19:45 PM AEST
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Not trying to be hateful or anything. Just thought I would point, for future reference... out in your line..."My intelligence would put Einstein to shame" You misspelled Albert Einstein's name. Unless you meant another Einstein, of course. And these words phenomenal (fenominal)...conceited (concieded). If I am unsure of how to spell a word, I always look it up. Use spell check if you need to. It is provided on the site. It makes for much more smarter reading with smarter spelling. The overall meaning of your write was right on. Peace, Laura
P.S. your pug avatar is great....cute as can be

Re: Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by Leviticus on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 08:50:44 PM AEST
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Very interesting and unique... Great Poem.

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