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Array ( [sid] => 113661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => burn the world [time] => 2006-01-23 17:45:28 [hometext] => just words and rants [bodytext] => soft reproach in the barriers i have to climb
trying to succeed seems like a waste of time
doors getting slamed face stating bruised
all the while feeling alone, lost and used
try as i might there is no helpful way
to advance my career with out having to pay
screawed from the start thats how it began
gifted child but anger in me i ran
never passed a grade but they slide me threw
the intelligence in me they saw it two
was born with no rules that how i lived my way
never regreating what i did each and every day
but the fire that consumed the spirit in me
wants to see the world finally set free
but deep in my heart i have a deep sin
i want to see the world burn i want no one to win
seeing this game of souls being played
the battle was lost even before it was layed
we fight with our sin to escape without it set
when in the womb our fathers brought our regreat
is this anger in a rightful place
or am i wasting my time with this race
what ever i do i will get things straight
even if i try to run from fate [comments] => 1 [counter] => 428 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
burn the world

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 05:45:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



soft reproach in the barriers i have to climb
trying to succeed seems like a waste of time
doors getting slamed face stating bruised
all the while feeling alone, lost and used
try as i might there is no helpful way
to advance my career with out having to pay
screawed from the start thats how it began
gifted child but anger in me i ran
never passed a grade but they slide me threw
the intelligence in me they saw it two
was born with no rules that how i lived my way
never regreating what i did each and every day
but the fire that consumed the spirit in me
wants to see the world finally set free
but deep in my heart i have a deep sin
i want to see the world burn i want no one to win
seeing this game of souls being played
the battle was lost even before it was layed
we fight with our sin to escape without it set
when in the womb our fathers brought our regreat
is this anger in a rightful place
or am i wasting my time with this race
what ever i do i will get things straight
even if i try to run from fate




Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-01-23 17:45:28]
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Re: burn the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 09:14:04 AM AEST
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a very wise and deep writting i can relate to this life and all it's games that hide till there owners are ready to unleash them on your dreams like little attack dogs. great write r m.


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