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Array ( [sid] => 113651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Enjoyable Hell [time] => 2006-01-23 14:39:10 [hometext] => I was just glancing through a scrapbook I got as a graduation present from high school... I used to be little... :: sigh :: [bodytext] => I don't remember many of them
As I look through the pages
Filled with pictures of my youth.
I think back to being younger.
When Saturdays were days for play
And marathons of cartoons
And Sundays were spent playing quietly
While my parents napped after church
My brother and I would play outside,
Running about, not doing anything
But loving every minute of it.
What wouldn't I give,
To go back and just to live?
To go back to the when my only worry
Was how much time I spent outside?
I turn the page, and then I know
Just what I wouldn't give.
I see a picture from two years ago,
From our first date together.
You look so beautiful, as always.
I think back to before we ever met.
Sure, I was happy then.
Everything was simpler.
But would I trade your love
Just to be where I was before?
Not on either of our lives.
Before, I didn't know it, but I was in an enjoyable Hell
Now, I have you, and I'm in heaven. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 44 [informant] => sir_odd87 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )
Enjoyable Hell

Contributed by sir_odd87 on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 02:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic



I don't remember many of them
As I look through the pages
Filled with pictures of my youth.
I think back to being younger.
When Saturdays were days for play
And marathons of cartoons
And Sundays were spent playing quietly
While my parents napped after church
My brother and I would play outside,
Running about, not doing anything
But loving every minute of it.
What wouldn't I give,
To go back and just to live?
To go back to the when my only worry
Was how much time I spent outside?
I turn the page, and then I know
Just what I wouldn't give.
I see a picture from two years ago,
From our first date together.
You look so beautiful, as always.
I think back to before we ever met.
Sure, I was happy then.
Everything was simpler.
But would I trade your love
Just to be where I was before?
Not on either of our lives.
Before, I didn't know it, but I was in an enjoyable Hell
Now, I have you, and I'm in heaven.




Copyright © sir_odd87 ... [ 2006-01-23 14:39:10]
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Re: Enjoyable Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:16:01 PM AEST
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Man, I just love digging through old stuff. Since we've just recently moved, of course you find stuff packing and unpacking...it was so cool looking back through stuff. Sweet write. Peace, Laura


Re: Enjoyable Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:31:30 PM AEST
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a great trip down memory lane


Re: Enjoyable Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:56:14 PM AEST
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I didn't think it was that special....but it's a beautiful write...




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