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Array ( [sid] => 113648 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Sober Train [time] => 2006-01-23 13:49:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => fall off
a merry go round
round and round
till' we're gone
fallen off
into the ground
no more around
all dead and gone
falling off
So am I
everything that dies
goes to the ground
things fell
out of my hand
like I die at night
a lonely man
falling alone
Into the unknown
leave it for words
to explain my own
the way
I fall as a death
It hurts to do the same
and so I bled
from falling off
my will to live
but it hurts so good
its taste is gone
I've fallen off
this sober train
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 66 [informant] => danimus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
This Sober Train

Contributed by danimus on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 01:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



fall off
a merry go round
round and round
till' we're gone
fallen off
into the ground
no more around
all dead and gone
falling off
So am I
everything that dies
goes to the ground
things fell
out of my hand
like I die at night
a lonely man
falling alone
Into the unknown
leave it for words
to explain my own
the way
I fall as a death
It hurts to do the same
and so I bled
from falling off
my will to live
but it hurts so good
its taste is gone
I've fallen off
this sober train




Copyright © danimus ... [ 2006-01-23 13:49:25]
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Re: This Sober Train (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:20:49 PM AEST
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Excellent write man, on a tough road to journey. I wish you peace. Laura


Re: This Sober Train (User Rating: 1 )
by happybunnyfan on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 05:19:53 PM AEST
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Great write, remindes me of my past...
Keep up the great writting.

Peace




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