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Array ( [sid] => 11360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ~*Empty Garden*~ [time] => 2003-01-26 21:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Slowly fading from the light,
Away from human touch.
Never have I ever thought,
That I could love so much.
From dying petals,
On withered stems.
No amount of apologies,
Would ever mend.
The blood that flows,
From that first prick.
Of thorns amongst the beauty.
Time begins to tick,
But slowly fades away.
No love lost.
No love anyway.
For the day it all began,
It was taken all from me.
No more beauty in this garden,
No more beauty left to see...
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Capergirl_23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

~*Empty Garden*~

Contributed by Capergirl_23 on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Slowly fading from the light,
Away from human touch.
Never have I ever thought,
That I could love so much.
From dying petals,
On withered stems.
No amount of apologies,
Would ever mend.
The blood that flows,
From that first prick.
Of thorns amongst the beauty.
Time begins to tick,
But slowly fades away.
No love lost.
No love anyway.
For the day it all began,
It was taken all from me.
No more beauty in this garden,
No more beauty left to see...

Copyright © Capergirl_23 ... [ 2003-01-26 21:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~*Empty Garden*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:44:00 PM AEST
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Wow! What a wonderful poem! I loved it, you are a very passionate writer. keep it up.
Lots of Luv, *Fiona*

Re: ~*Empty Garden*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:44:49 PM AEST
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this is an amazing write, very deep, love it.. also how you bring it around full circle..
and hey hey thanx for the inspiration for wolfflow and me on our unfinished poem:)
huggs always nessa

Re: ~*Empty Garden*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:45:45 PM AEST
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So very sad.....nicely done! Larry :o)

Re: ~*Empty Garden*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 01:36:36 AM AEST
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beautiful write..venkat

Re: ~*Empty Garden*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:19:33 AM AEST
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Wow this is beautiful! So deep. I love it. Excellent write!

~ Moonlit Angel

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