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Array ( [sid] => 113538 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Immortal Delusion [time] => 2006-01-21 09:18:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => These wings and feathers of my beckoning heart
Shield me from darkness
This kiss of life is so eternal
This kiss of death makes me feel human

I break away my halo torn
I cloak myself in a mantle of crimson
Let these lessons take you to my maze
Embrace me!

Nightmares feel to my real to touch
Daydreams speed past my eyes with lightning
Shatter this mirror for my reflection is lost
The night lingers in my mind with sleep

My innocent life once full of vitality
A life now taken into the limbo of indifference
Glomming to the moonrise for answers
Waiting for the answer that only time could bring

Catastrophe is my loving voice
Eden never looked so disgusting
Fear is my iron clad coat
Tongue my weapon of choice

This form is my scared right to bondage
My smile deformed into twistedness and woe
The frisson of the kill, the frisson of my darkness
Paranoia and Pain, payment of my perfection [comments] => 2 [counter] => 514 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Vampire_Slander [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Immortal Delusion

Contributed by Vampire_Slander on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 09:18:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



These wings and feathers of my beckoning heart
Shield me from darkness
This kiss of life is so eternal
This kiss of death makes me feel human

I break away my halo torn
I cloak myself in a mantle of crimson
Let these lessons take you to my maze
Embrace me!

Nightmares feel to my real to touch
Daydreams speed past my eyes with lightning
Shatter this mirror for my reflection is lost
The night lingers in my mind with sleep

My innocent life once full of vitality
A life now taken into the limbo of indifference
Glomming to the moonrise for answers
Waiting for the answer that only time could bring

Catastrophe is my loving voice
Eden never looked so disgusting
Fear is my iron clad coat
Tongue my weapon of choice

This form is my scared right to bondage
My smile deformed into twistedness and woe
The frisson of the kill, the frisson of my darkness
Paranoia and Pain, payment of my perfection




Copyright © Vampire_Slander ... [ 2006-01-21 09:18:54]
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Re: Immortal Delusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 12:36:38 PM AEST
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wow awesome poem!


Re: Immortal Delusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:57:33 AM AEST
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You have a way with words that makes your work exceptional. keep up the good work!




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