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The cover rises slowly
Roaring

Angry the winds gush
Between the four walls
Covered with old webs
Where they crawl sorely
Pestilential reptiles

His congested eyes
Overstep the dark darkness
Scanty times lit up
For rays shot to the glasses
Loaded of moss

He leaves slowly
Showing his greenish face
Cadaverous
Fastening a dry glance in the objective
With infinite disdain

His enormous feet
They move forward heavily
In a slow walk
But resolved

In His rigid lips it's distended
A terrifying smile
Cunning
When approximates of the sacrificed one

His tenacious hands
Of starved vulture
Don't let to escape the prey
Already dominated

In the prey eyes they are reflected
A mixed of fear and anxiety
Also her
Waits to be satiated

By Fernanda F. Rocha©

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The Insatiable Of The Night

Contributed by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 05:01:57 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Seized by the woodworm
The cover rises slowly
Roaring

Angry the winds gush
Between the four walls
Covered with old webs
Where they crawl sorely
Pestilential reptiles

His congested eyes
Overstep the dark darkness
Scanty times lit up
For rays shot to the glasses
Loaded of moss

He leaves slowly
Showing his greenish face
Cadaverous
Fastening a dry glance in the objective
With infinite disdain

His enormous feet
They move forward heavily
In a slow walk
But resolved

In His rigid lips it's distended
A terrifying smile
Cunning
When approximates of the sacrificed one

His tenacious hands
Of starved vulture
Don't let to escape the prey
Already dominated

In the prey eyes they are reflected
A mixed of fear and anxiety
Also her
Waits to be satiated

By Fernanda F. Rocha©

Copyright Â© Fernanda_F_Rocha ... [ 2006-01-21 05:01:57]
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Re: The Insatiable Of The Night (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 07:43:09 AM AEST
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nice imagery

NS

Re: The Insatiable Of The Night (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 07:46:45 AM AEST
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nice imagery

NS

Re: The Insatiable Of The Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 12:39:59 PM AEST
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great poem

Re: The Insatiable Of The Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 01:30:49 PM AEST
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well done

Re: The Insatiable Of The Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 12:58:34 PM AEST
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Yes, I agree, great imagery here. I also like the feelings of darkness you have so well conveyed!
Great job on this!!!

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