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Array ( [sid] => 113500 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing [time] => 2006-01-20 12:16:53 [hometext] => I went through so much stuff and in the end.....I wonder was it worth it. [bodytext] => I sit back and reflect on the past year
So I'll know what to change for this one
As I reflect, I realize I've lost myself
I'm not the same joyous person I once was
I don't associate with the same people
I don't even talk the same
I care less about other people and things
And I've lost more people physically and spirtually
than I want to count
Friend I thought were true, I've grown apart from
Aroung more unreal people than I want
Situations containing nothing but problems
in my way all day
which caused more people to be lost...
More reflecting made me realize that
I DEFINITELY don't want this year to be
the same as the last
And now I have to sit back and go find myself
All the while, in the back of mind
there's a little voice whispering to me
"Was it worth losing yourself?" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 440 [topic] => 65 [informant] => PainfulSpirit06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Losing

Contributed by PainfulSpirit06 on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:16:53 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I sit back and reflect on the past year
So I'll know what to change for this one
As I reflect, I realize I've lost myself
I'm not the same joyous person I once was
I don't associate with the same people
I don't even talk the same
I care less about other people and things
And I've lost more people physically and spirtually
than I want to count
Friend I thought were true, I've grown apart from
Aroung more unreal people than I want
Situations containing nothing but problems
in my way all day
which caused more people to be lost...
More reflecting made me realize that
I DEFINITELY don't want this year to be
the same as the last
And now I have to sit back and go find myself
All the while, in the back of mind
there's a little voice whispering to me
"Was it worth losing yourself?"

Copyright © PainfulSpirit06 ... [ 2006-01-20 12:16:53]
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Re: Losing (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:34:18 PM AEST
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wow this is really good i like it. it kind of sounds like what I write. good job , keep it up.

Re: Losing (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:16:50 PM AEST
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sad to say i have felt this way.
but soon you will find a new spin.
just as all fails a small win will grow to large
and find your self in you own mind it will be easier to find you in others eyes.
touching write

peach

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