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Array ( [sid] => 113490 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rain Drops on Relationship [time] => 2006-01-20 00:14:05 [hometext] => Love is like rain it falls and falls but never stops coming.. [bodytext] => Rain falls on the ground
I fall asleep to their sound
My world is colored vividly
Because you really love me

We go and dance in the rain
It seems to wash away the pain
I believe there are no more lies
We stare into each other's eyes

The rain falls from above
I know that we are in love
Because you smile at me
You made truely believe

My tears mix with the rain
Feelings all turn to pain
You won't look me in the eye
I cried when you said "good-bye"

I'm drowning in a mix of rain and tears
I'm drowing in all of my pain and fears
Wanting you back makes my mind whirl
With those words you made me a lonely girl [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 24 [informant] => MysticFireFairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Rain Drops on Relationship

Contributed by MysticFireFairy on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:14:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Rain falls on the ground
I fall asleep to their sound
My world is colored vividly
Because you really love me

We go and dance in the rain
It seems to wash away the pain
I believe there are no more lies
We stare into each other's eyes

The rain falls from above
I know that we are in love
Because you smile at me
You made truely believe

My tears mix with the rain
Feelings all turn to pain
You won't look me in the eye
I cried when you said "good-bye"

I'm drowning in a mix of rain and tears
I'm drowing in all of my pain and fears
Wanting you back makes my mind whirl
With those words you made me a lonely girl

Copyright © MysticFireFairy ... [ 2006-01-20 00:14:05]
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Re: Rain Drops on Relationship (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 06:06:00 AM AEST
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well done

Re: Rain Drops on Relationship (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:01:44 PM AEST
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awww, what a sad ending but there are moments of beauty also, guess love is like that but in time you feel the rain again and u will smile, what a lovely poem . . .

(((((Kayla))))))

Ben

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