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Array ( [sid] => 113437 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why girl? why? [time] => 2006-01-19 02:24:58 [hometext] => Its a poem i wrote after i was sad and angry at my friend for leaving me for another girl, and being that girls copycat. She was at once a great mate to me but now she has changed, become someone else. [bodytext] =>
Few weeks of being alone
Feeling life overthrown
Missed her so
Waiting for her to come back
So I could have my friend back
Finally the days of waiting are over
She’s back in almost a happy state
But then announces defeat
That she doesn’t think were great friends no more
I stare at my feet
Why girl? why?
Why stop our friendship now?
Why desert our line of secrets
Strongest line of being
Now knowing that one other has came between us
Torn us
Without you realising ,acknowledging
That I still want to be a friend
Someone you can enjoy time with
Have fun and share secrets
Laugh about things that should be laughed at
Make fun at the class dorks
Try on each others clothes
Tell each other
Help each other
From what’s right and what’s wrong
Thinking up things to get back at those girls
Who tried to make our living life hell
But now when I realise
When I was with you
I didn’t care
My life I didn’t fear
But then one day you got bored
Found this other girl
Who I could smell was danger
Now I cant prevent what she will do
Wrapping you around her finger
Good bye to you
But why do you care more about her and not us?
We thought we’d be friends for ever
But you chucked it away
I’m sick of being on the side line
Friends or not friends
I still care
And one day you’ll realise
That one day
I might not be there
Waiting for you.

by purple_vixen
aka samantha. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 16 [informant] => purple_vixen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
why girl? why?

Contributed by purple_vixen on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:24:58 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry




Few weeks of being alone
Feeling life overthrown
Missed her so
Waiting for her to come back
So I could have my friend back
Finally the days of waiting are over
She’s back in almost a happy state
But then announces defeat
That she doesn’t think were great friends no more
I stare at my feet
Why girl? why?
Why stop our friendship now?
Why desert our line of secrets
Strongest line of being
Now knowing that one other has came between us
Torn us
Without you realising ,acknowledging
That I still want to be a friend
Someone you can enjoy time with
Have fun and share secrets
Laugh about things that should be laughed at
Make fun at the class dorks
Try on each others clothes
Tell each other
Help each other
From what’s right and what’s wrong
Thinking up things to get back at those girls
Who tried to make our living life hell
But now when I realise
When I was with you
I didn’t care
My life I didn’t fear
But then one day you got bored
Found this other girl
Who I could smell was danger
Now I cant prevent what she will do
Wrapping you around her finger
Good bye to you
But why do you care more about her and not us?
We thought we’d be friends for ever
But you chucked it away
I’m sick of being on the side line
Friends or not friends
I still care
And one day you’ll realise
That one day
I might not be there
Waiting for you.

by purple_vixen
aka samantha.




Copyright © purple_vixen ... [ 2006-01-19 02:24:58]
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Re: why girl? why? (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 04:38:49 AM AEST
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this was the most wonderful depressing write i ever read it was wonderful


Re: why girl? why? (User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 07:03:57 PM AEST
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this was a good write... I wouldn't wont one of my friends walking by me everyday ignoring me and talking to thier other friends either ....... and ignoring me like they dont care nomore for u




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